The discussions have often occured worldwide in various conference on how to protect the environment and various possible measures have been taken so far but the measures taken are not sufficient in protecting environmental conditions glaobally. The consistent decline in glaciers and increase in global warming proves that we are still lacking behind in guarding nature. Nature supports humanity and humanity supports different types of arts but the most important call to action as per government, various NGO and industries is nature that is our environment, the place we live in. In paragraphs mentioned below I have thrown some light on the key supporting idea.
The first key aspect is that countries are really serious for taking measures in the enviromental research and studies. Not only this but, environmental studies is being taught to students in their schools, so that when they grow they can actively support this cause. Various movements and government aided projects like biogas as a new fuel energy cannot disprove that this sector is the most desirable today.
For instance, people started using renewable energy resources like one mentioned above and stopped using natural resources because of the decrease in their availability.
Furthermore, countries like Germany have been investing too much into generating energy from wind and solar. In addition, start of environment friendly bags company has given a boost not only to the industries but also to the good health of people. Disease like cancer, asthma are all result of negligence of nature. So, investing money in it for more awareness and preventive measures will surely help for the betterment of society, which in turn will promote different form of creative and more innovative art with good health.
Therefore, more and more should be acted upon the conditions and environment we are into followed by people, industries showing more interest in this as one of the best research fields to spread hapiness among humanity forever. To balance the harmony between true art that is nature and the man made art.
- TPO-09 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Technology has made children less creative than they were in the past. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 76
- You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or to try to get a job. You think she should get a jobWrite a letter to this friend. In your letterSay why she would not enjoy going to collegeExplain why gettin 70
- The claim that animals have rights has been the subject of much debate since the 1970s Are zoos helping or hurting our animals Should zoos be banned Do you agree or disagree 87
- Write a letter complaining about the dirty roads and garbage in your street.What the problems would beWhat are the main causesYour suggestions 61
- TPO-45 - Integrated Writing Task Any student of paleontology will be struck by the fact that a great many animals of the past were considerably larger than they are today. This holds true for species ranging from dinosaurs to most mammals. Just why they w 80
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 81, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: have
...ancements in technology we really might have have excelled but, no doubt we have left the...
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Line 1, column 86, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'had'.
Suggestion: had
...ents in technology we really might have have excelled but, no doubt we have left the...
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Line 1, column 391, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a thousand'.
Suggestion: a thousand
...arth' that has been existing since thousand years in this universe. They declining ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, really, so, therefore, as to, for example, for instance, in addition, no doubt, such as, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 43.0788530466 60% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 52.1666666667 119% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2164.0 1977.66487455 109% => OK
No of words: 421.0 407.700716846 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14014251781 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52971130743 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86088909038 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 234.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555819477435 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 671.4 618.680645161 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 20.1344086022 139% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.2371609188 48.9658058833 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.266666667 100.406767564 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.0666666667 20.6045352989 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.26666666667 5.45110844103 170% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0635744044868 0.236089414692 27% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0252104327882 0.076458572812 33% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0166261749333 0.0737576698707 23% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0405554927126 0.150856017488 27% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00591618944274 0.0645574589148 9% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 11.7677419355 143% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 58.1214874552 74% => It means the essay is relatively harder to read.
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.1575268817 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 10.9000537634 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.01818996416 111% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 86.8835125448 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 10.002688172 200% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.0537634409 131% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 78.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.5 Out of 30
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