A company is going to give some money either to support the arts or to protect the environment. Which do you think the company should choose? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
It is very challenging for company administrators to decide how to spend their money. However, companies should use their money to protect the environment. I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, most of the human economic activities have affected nature negatively especially by a huge group named the company. Earth is already being deteriorated because of many economic factors such as factories and foundries etc. Even if they do not have any factory, they are responsible for the current consequence a little at least. For example, the famous corporation Google, not any other part of the Alphabet.Inc provides search service online and earns money through many commercials. It seems like they do not make any noxious substance to possibly worsen globe. However, their data centers use a lot of electricity and subsequently is responsible for generating power and uses many energy sources such as fossil, gas and nuclear, etc. As a result, that company is partially responsible for the devastating of our nature.
Moreover, nowadays most people consider protecting the environment is important. So often the reputation that whether the company pays attention to the environment affects their revenue indirectly. For instance, in South Korea some company threw away their detrimental chemical waste in the river illegally, even they knew that is venomous to wildlife. As a result, many people had a bad image for the company, subsequently boycotted their commodities. So it diminishes their reputation and revenue. They officially had a press conference and apologized but it didn't work. As a result, it showed whether paying attention to nature affects business indirectly.
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- A company is going to give some money either to support the arts or to protect the environment. Which do you think the company should choose? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 66
- A company is going to give some money either to support the arts or to protect the environment. Which do you think the company should choose? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 76
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, moreover, so, at least, for example, for instance, i feel, such as, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 43.0788530466 56% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 52.1666666667 42% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1445.0 1977.66487455 73% => OK
No of words: 274.0 407.700716846 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27372262774 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.48103885553 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87356095279 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.609489051095 0.524837075471 116% => OK
syllable_count: 466.2 618.680645161 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.4328425112 48.9658058833 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.0 100.406767564 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1176470588 20.6045352989 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.58823529412 5.45110844103 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127270801172 0.236089414692 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0477086500597 0.076458572812 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.075434491756 0.0737576698707 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108505670432 0.150856017488 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0715517987731 0.0645574589148 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 11.7677419355 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 58.1214874552 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.99 10.9000537634 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.01818996416 111% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 86.8835125448 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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