A company has announced that it wishes to build a large factory near your community. Do you support or oppose the factory? Explain your position.
Brand new building with high technology is the mark of city development. It could be a skyscraper or a modern factory with sophisticated machinery. If my community attracts a big company to open their new branches, in this case is a large factory, I personally support it, based on several reasons.
First, the factory will open a new job opportunity. The new factory will need numerous employees with broad range requirement. From security guards to the head of the factory, it will become the new source of income and subsequently lower the level of poverty in my area. It will contribute to the advancement of the community by paying tax to the government thus facilitates the government to fix public facilities and improve education and health facilities.
Second, it will bring investment to the area. When big factory constructs in your area, there will be an improvement in surrounding infrastructure. For instance, to build a new factory with a high capacity to produce goods, the company needs a proper road with numerous line and harder concrete. In addition, they will need a better street sign and public facility. It usually needs a producer of the material. To lower the transportation cost, they might try to build another factory. When there is need of high rates of shipping, they probably need an airport or a seaport. These new facilities will bring good to society. Freeport in middle of Papua Guinea is the best example for this. They have amazing highway, modern hospital and an international school in the middle of nowhere. All of these things could happen because of this big company.
Third, it will give new skills to our people. With new technology, the employee supposed to increase their knowledge. They need to adapt to new environment. They will push their kids to have higher education and so on. For example, because the minimal requirement to work in this large factory is high school diploma, a lot of parents send their kids to university outside their hometown, hoping they will get a higher position in the company. Increasing level of education is a sign of cultivated society and the better quality of life.
Of course, there are downsides with a big factory built near community complex. A risk of pollution from factory waste and diminished natural resources are several of them. But considering the advantage of this kind of construction, I believe this is right decision to make.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, so, third, thus, for example, for instance, in addition, kind of, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 9.8082437276 194% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.0286738351 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 52.1666666667 123% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.0752688172 223% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2030.0 1977.66487455 103% => OK
No of words: 408.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97549019608 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49433085973 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8424060926 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.507352941176 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 639.9 618.680645161 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Interrogative: 2.0 0.994623655914 201% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.7625958394 48.9658058833 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.1851851852 100.406767564 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1111111111 20.6045352989 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.66666666667 5.45110844103 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.88709677419 225% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126199542792 0.236089414692 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0344790542719 0.076458572812 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0462253764862 0.0737576698707 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0803995207128 0.150856017488 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0316089126264 0.0645574589148 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.01 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 86.8835125448 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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