Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents are the best teachers. Use specific resons and examples to support your answer.
Growth and development of human being are affected by their genetic inheritance and enviroment. Parents are the major factor for both. Not only congenital disease but also the accomodation where the children grow are connected with parents, directly or not. Children like a white paper, they very innocent and easily molded. For instance, infants start learning by imitated their parents thus parents are the first source of knowledge. In my opinion, parents are the best teachers someone can have.
Parents are the best person to give example to their kids. I believe the best teacher is someone who walk the talk. Since parents have the longest contact, the chances to represent kids with lesson are numerous. The way they educated us, will show in our upbringing. For example, a parent who love music and play an instrument, unconsciously planted love to music to their kids. They will put importance in music education and encouraged their kid to pursue them. This will not happen with a parent who can’t play music and can’t see the advantage of playing instrument.
Parents also have unconditional love to their kids. Teachers have ability to love their student. They will try to educate the student instead of only teaching them. Parents take this qualification to whole different level. Parents will never teach a bad thing or have an ill-will for their kids. Some teacher doesn’t like a student because the way they speak or dressed but parents will always accept their kids' condition. They also will always try to prevent any harm to their kids and direct their kids to a right path.
Parents are a teacher who never retired. Since we are born until their death, they will always become a resource of wisdom and advice, friends to cry, and a person who push us to reach our dream. In the contrary, a professor will stop teaching us when we graduated but parents are in for the long run.
Knowledge can be found not only in school but also from our surrounding. Parents complete us with life lesson. They teach us with the best intention and sincere pray. That’s why parents are the best teacher someone could ask for.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, thus, for example, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1797.0 1977.66487455 91% => OK
No of words: 365.0 407.700716846 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92328767123 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37092360658 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4851353921 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.501369863014 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 542.7 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.1344086022 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.7742788937 48.9658058833 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.5555555556 100.406767564 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.5185185185 20.6045352989 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.66666666667 5.45110844103 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.112504222741 0.236089414692 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0439889861612 0.076458572812 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.04183124507 0.0737576698707 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0804744315829 0.150856017488 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0371921195652 0.0645574589148 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 11.7677419355 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.66 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 86.8835125448 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.0537634409 72% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.5 Out of 30
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