Compare and contrast your way of life with that of your parents Which way of life do you think would be more satisfying to the future generations
Technology has made the lives of people a lot more easier and a lot more unhealthier. People used to live a way more happier life in the past without causing much damage to nature. I personally believe that the way my parents used to live was the most satisfying lifestyle although they don't have comforts and luxuries like today. I feel this way for three reasons which I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, the lifestyle of people in the past requires minimum usage of natural resources. This ensure availability of resources to the future generations as well. People of my generation, means people today, are irresponsible of how their way of modern living is causing degradation of environment in many ways. For example, everyone now have a cell phone in their hands even if it is necessary or not. The increase in use of cell phones and the signals emitted by them have caused extinction of many species of birds. Also, usage of motor vehicles is on high these days and it is leading to some irreversible effects on air. If this continues, future generations are really at high risk.
Secondly, children usually learn things from parents. There's a study that shows children are more likely to imitate their parents actions in life. This shows it is how important to conduct our behaviour and lifestyle, otherwise generations will be effected from it. If we continue the same lazy and tech-dependent life style like today, the next generations will also do the same and this will definitely impact their mental health and physical health as well. My personal experience is a compelling example to this. One of my friend used to play video games all the time and rarely used to come out of it. Ultimately, he happened to diagnose with brain tumour. That's why it is really an alarming situation.
Finally, Socialisation is what makes people relax from the stress of day to day works. Sadly, people nowadays have no time for it, unlike people in the past who used to give higher importance to socialisation and sharing things with others. I can certainly say people have become selfish these days and this makes them alone. This isn't really a good virtue to be passed on to our future generations. For instance, many people don't even know the names of their neighbours. They just don't make an effort to know so. It is very discouraging behaviour of this generation and need to be changed.
In conlusion, I am of the opinion that the lifestyle of my parents generation is lot more better and satisfying to future generations. This is because they know the value of natural resources, they lead a healthy lifestyle in all aspects, and they give importance to people and relations.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use only 'easier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: easier
...logy has made the lives of people a lot more easier and a lot more unhealthier. People used...
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Message: Use only 'unhealthier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: unhealthier
...s of people a lot more easier and a lot more unhealthier. People used to live a way more happier...
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Message: Use only 'happier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: happier
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Message: Use only 'better' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, if, really, second, secondly, so, well, for example, for instance, i feel, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 49.0 43.0788530466 114% => OK
Preposition: 67.0 52.1666666667 128% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2233.0 1977.66487455 113% => OK
No of words: 467.0 407.700716846 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78158458244 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64867537961 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68315785053 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 239.0 212.727598566 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.511777301927 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 729.0 618.680645161 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.6003584229 136% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.365336441 48.9658058833 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.75 100.406767564 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6785714286 20.6045352989 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.89285714286 5.45110844103 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.5376344086 217% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167149921457 0.236089414692 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0449115249094 0.076458572812 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0511578810676 0.0737576698707 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0998202666048 0.150856017488 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0520996083023 0.0645574589148 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 11.7677419355 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 58.1214874552 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 86.8835125448 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.