Does the dancing play an important role in a culture? People express disparate opinion on this. From my perspective, I agree that the dance has the crucial role in any culture in as much as the following reasons.
First, any dance is the major source of entertainment and it gathers the all kinds of person such that they easily know and follow about their culture. For example, I used to live in the capital city –Kathmandu of Nepal. I did not understand the local festival of my village. However, when I reached to my village, then a club organized the cultural dance for entertainment and all people performs the dance such that I easily know about the culture. After that, I thought that my culture is the best culture.
Second, the dance exhibits their people’s culture and by performances in the dance, it saves the culture, as well as, people traditions too. For example, in my society, the practice of worship the plant was almost disappearing because the new kind generations were not interested to worship. After that, the adults made a dance to encourage the worship. The features of the dance are so exciting that all people became interested to worship the plants. At last the worshiping culture was saved.
Third, the dance obviously made the compulsion to follow. This is because people must show their dance to other society or culture. For instance, in our culture, we always sing and dance in any festival and all people follow the dance due to the necessary condition to show the nearby society. If we do not show the dance, the nearby society will be said that we do not follow our religion.
In conclusion, any dance plays a momentary role in a culture. This is because the dance gather all people, exhibits the culture, and the compulsion of performance made certainty to follow the culture.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, second, so, then, third, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 52.1666666667 67% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1524.0 1977.66487455 77% => OK
No of words: 315.0 407.700716846 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8380952381 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64640069413 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 212.727598566 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.479365079365 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 484.2 618.680645161 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.1685891322 48.9658058833 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.2105263158 100.406767564 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5789473684 20.6045352989 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.42105263158 5.45110844103 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176046333025 0.236089414692 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0692118771852 0.076458572812 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0732388776029 0.0737576698707 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125249930462 0.150856017488 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0605307473266 0.0645574589148 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.39 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 86.8835125448 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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