do you agree the family rules the same in the past
Most of people agree that family affects society in many different ways. In my opinion, the family still affects in our communities now as much as in the past. I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, families are the foundation of the whole world it is keeping the community strong and acting like one body, facing all problems together and feeling in every one in our family. Moreover, the family encourage the all members to help everyone fall in trouble. My own experience demonstrates this concept, two years ago, when I was at university, my cousin falls in problem he was lost all his money. Furthermore, his also lost his home and all something he had. when our family heard that they released meeting to help him and gather amount of many and sent to him. As a result, he was so happy and get stand again and bought everything and started a new life.
Secondly, when we have a big family and keep in touch at all time that will help everyone in our family, we share our experience and the advising to anyone needed, in the past the all families visited each other every weekend and asked about them life, which that make the relations between the all member strong, and we still visit our relative in our country. For instance, when I was a kid, my grandfather he kept visited us every day and invited the all members family to his house to have a food, we meet there our counions and we played together, which make our so close and loved each other.
In conclusion, I am of the opinion that the family in these days have roles as the same family in the past and still important for everyone, this because the family stand and feel in all members of it, and it is the only one help us to face our problems.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'Most of', you should use 'the' ('Most of the people') or simply say ''Most people''.
Suggestion: Most of the people; Most people
Most of people agree that family affects society in ma...
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Line 1, column 53, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...le agree that family affects society in many different ways. In my opinion, the family still a...
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Line 5, column 475, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: When
...lost his home and all something he had. when our family heard that they released mee...
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Line 9, column 459, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'members'' or 'member's'?
Suggestion: members'; member's
...isited us every day and invited the all members family to his house to have a food, we ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, as a result, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 43.0788530466 116% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1457.0 1977.66487455 74% => OK
No of words: 329.0 407.700716846 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.42857142857 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29988172224 2.67179642975 86% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.51367781155 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 465.3 618.680645161 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.1344086022 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 90.3442105997 48.9658058833 185% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.416666667 100.406767564 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.4166666667 20.6045352989 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.1666666667 5.45110844103 223% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138686502425 0.236089414692 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0615354671107 0.076458572812 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0628903472032 0.0737576698707 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11535358546 0.150856017488 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0613244311878 0.0645574589148 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 11.7677419355 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 58.1214874552 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.71 10.9000537634 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.47 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 86.8835125448 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.0537634409 127% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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