Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Teacher were more appreciated and valued by society in the past than they were nowadays.
most of people agree that the time affect society in many different ways. In my opinion, the efficient time is enormously beneficial to both individuals and communities as whole. I feel that for two reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, most people spent a lot of times to change their moods and run away from a round stress. moreover, they felt free when practice something new out of routine. my own personal experience demonstrates this concept. ten years ago, when I was in high school, I had a lot of exam and homeworks. I felt it was so hard to put myself in pressure and did all my assignment together .As a result, I deiced to went outside my home and did some new activities might help me to pass this critical period.so I played some of sports with my friends and took a tour around my town. And also when I get back to my home I played play station with my brothers. In fact I found it a good way to change my mood and get ready to study and focus in my subjects. Furthermore, I got a high score in my subjects at the end of the semester.
secondly, some people fall in some problems in work, as a result they need some of rest so they travel a lot and going to parks and doing a new activity to convert them to a great mood. And it is also useful for them healthy when they spend some time in non-scheduled activities. For instant, two years ago when I Had some problems in my work I invited my friends to my home to playing football and had some foods. moreover, we discussed to go to mall and watched some a new movie. In fact, it is playing a good factor to concentrated and get fresh to work and solve all problems.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Most
most of people agree that the time affect so...
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Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
most of people agree that the time affect society in m...
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Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...e agree that the time affect society in many different ways. In my opinion, the efficient time...
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...ll explore in the following essay. First of all, most people spent a lot of...
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Suggestion: Moreover
...moods and run away from a round stress. moreover, they felt free when practice something...
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...l experience demonstrates this concept. ten years ago, when I was in high school, I...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun exam seems to be countable; consider using: 'a lot of exams'.
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...ssure and did all my assignment together .As a result, I deiced to went outside my...
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...ure and did all my assignment together .As a result, I deiced to went outside my h...
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Line 9, column 517, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'some of', you should use 'the' ('some of the sports') or simply say ''some sports''.
Suggestion: some of the sports; some sports
...o pass this critical period.so I played some of sports with my friends and took a tour around ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...bjects at the end of the semester. secondly, some people fall in some probl...
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...at the end of the semester. secondly, some people fall in some problems in w...
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Suggestion: Moreover
...to playing football and had some foods. moreover, we discussed to go to mall and watched...
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Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'discussed going', 'discussed gonna'.
Suggestion: discussed going; discussed gonna
...otball and had some foods. moreover, we discussed to go to mall and watched some a new movie. I...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, i feel, in fact, as a result, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 15.1003584229 33% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1365.0 1977.66487455 69% => OK
No of words: 320.0 407.700716846 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.265625 4.8611393121 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49334857358 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.528125 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 416.7 618.680645161 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.0210824008 48.9658058833 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.3125 100.406767564 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.6045352989 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.4375 5.45110844103 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 15.0 5.5376344086 271% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0482492719292 0.236089414692 20% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0186203858843 0.076458572812 24% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0252496597043 0.0737576698707 34% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0420303011366 0.150856017488 28% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0181944610394 0.0645574589148 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 11.7677419355 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 58.1214874552 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.49 10.9000537634 69% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.15 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 86.8835125448 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.