My Mother always says that life is a present for us which is giving by God but worse part of it is childhoods. Even thought my mother, there are advantages of being child such as life without no concern. there are numerous adverse effects too. I am with my mother and I believe that it is not best time in people’s life. Lines are below will shad on light my standpoint.
First of all, the foremost reason coming to my mind is that economic reasons. We all used to be a child and have tidy budget to buy something they want. For example, If they want a toy, they have to ask for parents to buy. Moreover, Kids do not make their own decision. Take my own experience, when I was seven years old I used to read comic books. The characters of comic books was my heros and I used to love it to read them but my mother never bought them for me because they were expensive. It was so terrible for me. Now I earn my own money and buy what I want
Secondly, in addition to the importance of economic reasons, It was remarkable to consider that there are many positive outcomes of being an adults such as working, traveling alone. I think being a adult is good because you can conduct you bussines and work overseas counties. Furthermore, If you are hardworking you can oversee a big project and travel all over the World. But if you are a child you dependend your family. Being a adults brings decent carrier opportunities.
Lastly, Individuals who are an adults have residental independency. Having own house come with many enyojable thinks such as making parties, watching movies until late hours, cooking meals with friends. If you are a child you have limited life.
Taking all foremention reasons it would be concluded that chilhood is not happinest time in a person’s life. Some other may adhere it but this is my opinions.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 205, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: There
... child such as life without no concern. there are numerous adverse effects too. I am ...
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Line 1, column 290, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'not the best'.
Suggestion: not the best
...with my mother and I believe that it is not best time in people's life. Lines are b...
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Line 2, column 565, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... I earn my own money and buy what I want Secondly, in addition to the importance ...
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Line 4, column 139, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'an adult' or simply 'adults'?
Suggestion: an adult; adults
...ere are many positive outcomes of being an adults such as working, traveling alone. I thi...
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Line 4, column 197, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...working, traveling alone. I think being a adult is good because you can conduct y...
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Line 4, column 431, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... child you dependend your family. Being a adults brings decent carrier opportunit...
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Line 4, column 431, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a adult' or simply 'adults'?
Suggestion: a adult; adults
... child you dependend your family. Being a adults brings decent carrier opportunities. ...
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Line 6, column 29, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'an adult' or simply 'adults'?
Suggestion: an adult; adults
...unities. Lastly, Individuals who are an adults have residental independency. Having ow...
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Line 6, column 204, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...late hours, cooking meals with friends. If you are a child you have limited life. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, lastly, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, for example, i think, in addition, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 15.1003584229 179% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 51.0 43.0788530466 118% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 52.1666666667 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1510.0 1977.66487455 76% => OK
No of words: 333.0 407.700716846 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.53453453453 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57686006127 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.57957957958 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 618.680645161 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.2902942561 48.9658058833 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.6363636364 100.406767564 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1363636364 20.6045352989 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.90909090909 5.45110844103 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133608466062 0.236089414692 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0452130646437 0.076458572812 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0646351487485 0.0737576698707 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0855483902073 0.150856017488 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0476582524903 0.0645574589148 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.5 11.7677419355 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 58.1214874552 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.1575268817 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.4 10.9000537634 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 86.8835125448 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.