do you agree or disagree that the families shall allow to their kids to play computer games

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do you agree or disagree that the families shall allow to their kids to play computer games

people have different opinions about whether they should allow to their kids to play electronic games or not ,from my point of view that if the parent shall agree to let their children watching or practicing computer games will lead to positive outcome therefore i totally agree with this statement owing to a number of rational reasons which i will explore them below:
first it is safer to the kids to stay at home and play than go outside ,specially today a lot of accident can the kid vulnerable out of their houses like car accident or kidnapping ,as well it is more easy to families to check their kids and check and control what they are watching and with whom they usually meet while if our kids choose to play out side it will be hard to their families to see them .

research approved recently that the kids who play game become smarter than other kids who are not playing computer games cause they can learn a lot of trick and strategies through the videos games
however some people think that sitting long time on the computers will make the child less social but this is not point because the parent can control the time of playing , study , and family .

finally with the development and advance technologies it become very necessary to the kids to master software devices specially today computer or videos games being excellent career and person can have a good pay profession if he masters the videos game software and he knows how the software develops .
to close considering the points mentioned above allowing to our kids to watching video game will lead to a positive result and based on that i strongly agree with the statement

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, however, if, so, therefore, well, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 43.0788530466 67% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1365.0 1977.66487455 69% => OK
No of words: 291.0 407.700716846 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69072164948 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31386859093 2.67179642975 87% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 212.727598566 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.546391752577 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 422.1 618.680645161 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 9.59856630824 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 20.6003584229 19% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 72.0 20.1344086022 358% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 232.420954305 48.9658058833 475% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 341.25 100.406767564 340% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 72.75 20.6045352989 353% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 15.0 5.45110844103 275% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 65.0 5.5376344086 1174% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.366254057045 0.236089414692 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.204194994863 0.076458572812 267% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0942164057125 0.0737576698707 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178596746375 0.150856017488 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0728199424135 0.0645574589148 113% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 37.0 11.7677419355 314% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 6.86 58.1214874552 12% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 30.2 10.1575268817 297% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 11.11 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.98 8.01818996416 124% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 86.8835125448 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 53.0 10.002688172 530% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 30.8 10.0537634409 306% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 31.0 10.247311828 303% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200

Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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