Integrate writing : Carved stone balls are a curious type of artifact found at a number of locations in Scotland. They date from the late Neolithic period, around 4,000 years ago. They are round in shape; they were carved from several types of stone; most

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Both the reading the passage about the meaning and the use of the carved stone balls found in Scotland the author of the reading passage suggest three theories about the purpose and the meaning of the stones, the Lecturer cast doubt about the claim made by the author, He thinks that none of the three theory is correct

First of all the author point out that the stones might be used for hunting , it is mentioned that “Some of the stone balls have been found with holes in them “ and these holes can make the stone easy to hold and fight /hunt so as to swing and through this point is challenged by the lecture , She Said that there is no sign of wears ,crack &damages
Secondly the author claim the second theory which state that the stone might be used for measuring or weighting , the article notes that most of the stone have same size like 70 mm diameter this theory been rebutted by the lecturer , She argue that the in spite that the stones have almost the same size , they have different density which means that the stone can have two different weight for the same dimensions , the lecturer emphasizes on this point by mentioning there the stones there different in type some stone made from the sand for from other material which lead that the stone cannot be used for measuring the weight

Finally the lecturer discuss the third theory that been suggested in which the theory suggest that the stones used for social occasion this the lecturer denied this theory because some of the stone is very simple and there is no stone been found inside Grave where usually the old people used to bury the stones with their dead people

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, if, second, secondly, so, third, as to, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.4613686534 124% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 5.04856512141 99% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 7.30242825607 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 12.0772626932 141% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 22.412803532 112% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 30.3222958057 109% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 5.01324503311 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1373.0 1373.03311258 100% => OK
No of words: 298.0 270.72406181 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.60738255034 5.08290768461 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.04702891845 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 1.96984000626 2.5805825403 76% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 145.348785872 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.459731543624 0.540411800872 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 414.0 419.366225166 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 3.25607064018 154% => OK
Article: 3.0 8.23620309051 36% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 2.5761589404 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 13.0662251656 8% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 298.0 21.2450331126 1403% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.2860985944 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1373.0 110.228320801 1246% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 298.0 21.698381199 1373% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 73.0 7.06452816374 1033% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 56.0 4.19205298013 1336% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 4.33554083885 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 4.45695364238 22% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.27373068433 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17164621144 0.272083759551 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.17164621144 0.0996497079465 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0662205650399 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100367921776 0.162205337803 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0333456081056 0.0443174109184 75% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 149.3 13.3589403974 1118% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -214.07 53.8541721854 -397% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 5.55761589404 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 117.2 11.0289183223 1063% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 10.94 12.2367328918 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 20.59 8.42419426049 244% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 41.0 63.6247240618 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 51.0 10.7273730684 475% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 121.2 10.498013245 1155% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 21.0 11.2008830022 187% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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