Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
The ability to maintain friendships with a small number of people over a long period of time is more important for happiness than the ability to make many new friends easily.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
It goes without saying that in today’s progressive world where we live, hamuans are susceptible to different challenges in life and need someone to help them in order to encounter with issues and make the life easier. Therefore, communication with people and making friends is the best way to achieve this goel and help each indivuduals to reach happiness during lifetime. Some scientists believe that making plenty of new friends is better to have some small friends over a long period of time. I am of the opnion that, keeping the small old friends instead of a lot of new freinds have some advantages. The reasons to support my idea are illustrated in the following paragraphs.
To begin with, old friendships makes us happiness because old friends familiar with us for a long time and can figure out which activity can have positive effect on our mood and which one bring the sadness.
For instance, last year, I got deep depression and each person suggested to try something new such as travel, book or shoping to feel better but none of them can survive me on that situation. But one of my childhood’s friend who knew me better than anyone else, forced me to attend in swim and dance class as a threatment. In fact, she exactly understand the best way to be cured is sport and music cause she recognized that I feel alive with these kind of activity and can not persistent. As a result, I have recovered after three months. If I had not close friend for a long time, I could not be treated by new friend’s opinion who had not known me for a long time.
Furthermore, having a small old friends who aware of our talented is beneficial to obtain the successful and enjoyment. Actually, they consider all our imperfection. So, it is a good chance to get the advice them for making a best decision. For example, when I have to decide to go to university, I have been dilemma between chossing the art and computer major. Under such circumastance, most of the people advised me to study computer. But my close friends who have known me for 10 years, suggested to continue art field since they identified my ability in art in these years. As a result, I became as an artist and I am so happy to attention my friends’s opinion.
In conclusion, having considered the above mentioned into account, I strongly belive that, keeping the small old friendship have most important influence in our decision and feelings. Consequntly, if we would like to feel euphoric in our life, it is better to attention to our old friends instead of making new friends.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 481, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
... to have some small friends over a long period of time. I am of the opnion that, keeping the s...
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Line 3, column 64, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'suggested trying'.
Suggestion: suggested trying
..., I got deep depression and each person suggested to try something new such as travel, book or s...
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Line 3, column 344, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[3]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'understands'.
Suggestion: understands
...s as a threatment. In fact, she exactly understand the best way to be cured is sport and m...
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Line 3, column 443, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'these kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
...e she recognized that I feel alive with these kind of activity and can not persistent. As ...
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Line 4, column 33, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'friend'?
Suggestion: friend
... time. Furthermore, having a small old friends who aware of our talented is beneficial...
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Line 4, column 224, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...hance to get the advice them for making a best decision. For example, when I have...
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Line 4, column 490, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'suggested continuing'.
Suggestion: suggested continuing
...friends who have known me for 10 years, suggested to continue art field since they identified my abil...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, furthermore, if, so, therefore, for example, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, in fact, kind of, such as, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 43.0788530466 118% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 52.1666666667 123% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2108.0 1977.66487455 107% => OK
No of words: 452.0 407.700716846 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.66371681416 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61088837703 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70934879887 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 238.0 212.727598566 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.526548672566 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 651.6 618.680645161 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.7426917599 48.9658058833 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.4 100.406767564 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6 20.6045352989 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 5.45110844103 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243944394869 0.236089414692 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0685077694045 0.076458572812 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0553961789148 0.0737576698707 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137480833886 0.150856017488 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0520385359031 0.0645574589148 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 11.7677419355 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 58.1214874552 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 10.9000537634 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 86.8835125448 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.