Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The advice from the grandparents is of no use to their grandchildren because the world has changeda lot over the past 50 years.

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The advice from the grandparents is of no use to their grandchildren because the world has changed
a lot over the past 50 years.

Each person may have momentous words in his life history no matter in which era he lived. Therefore, some people believe that grandparents’ recommendations are useless for next young generations due to the change of the world. From my own personal perspective, as the world’s change comes from increasingly flourishing of technology, it has nothing to do with expiration of grandparent’s advices and they are more valuable than one may assume.
First and foremost, the changing world only can influence life setting and principle of living such as morality, etiquette, social polite manners always remains identical. As living have a definite scheme throughout the civilization history, people are share able their experiences to next generations. Consistence with this, elderly people definitely must have numerous memories expressing their experiences to convey to their grandchildren. No doubt, in each memory, many points exist to be taken into consideration which help youth to have a tangible sense of probable tough situations that they may confront especially in primary periods of their life. For example, when I was a kid, my grandmother taught me table manner since I was making noise by my mouth during having food.
Furthermore, as elderly people also have been living throughout the contemporary era, they might get adapted by it and understand today’s life complexity. In no circumstance should the understanding of the old people be overlooked because they are aware of world’s alternations. Hence, they could realize youth demands and try to advise them according to their modern attitude. Needless to say, grandparents mostly talked to their grandchildren with the deep emotions in case they do not be sad. Taking me, for instance, when my grandmother talk patiently talk to me, it seems like she get me rid of stresses due to my daily pressure and hectic life.
To encapsulate all the aforesaid accounts, technology only changes appearance and convenience of the life and also old people get more accustomed to present circumstances. Hence, grandparents’ advices do not undergo influence of modification of globe owing to developing technology. In addition, it should be recommended to young generations that not to turn a blind eye to precious word of elderly people and hold the highest regard to them.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 353, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[3]
Message: Verbs 'advise' and 'remind' are used with infinitive: 'to accord'.
Suggestion: to accord
...ze youth demands and try to advise them according to their modern attitude. Needless to s...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 597, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'gets'.
Suggestion: gets
...patiently talk to me, it seems like she get me rid of stresses due to my daily pres...
^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, hence, if, look, may, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in addition, no doubt, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1990.0 1977.66487455 101% => OK
No of words: 369.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39295392954 4.8611393121 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38284983912 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.268530869 2.67179642975 122% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 212.727598566 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59891598916 0.524837075471 114% => OK
syllable_count: 622.8 618.680645161 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.220623873 48.9658058833 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.375 100.406767564 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0625 20.6045352989 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 5.45110844103 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147461646653 0.236089414692 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.053017097138 0.076458572812 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0545181832402 0.0737576698707 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0927969634466 0.150856017488 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0342433991304 0.0645574589148 53% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 11.7677419355 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 58.1214874552 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.1575268817 132% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.28 10.9000537634 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.01818996416 113% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 86.8835125448 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.


Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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