Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
All scientific discoveries should be shared among all scientists all around the world; governments and businesses should not keep any discoveries secret.
Nowadays, with rapid globalization ongoing, there is always a debate about whether there should be borders in the field of science or not. Some people reckon that we should share all scientific discoveries, no matter what type of it, with the whole world, while others hold a reverse viewpoint. As far as I am concerned, I believe not all discoveries ought to be shared equally without restrictions.
Admittedly, some scientific discoveries can deliver more benefits to people all over the world if they are shared for free. To illustrate, if the medical companies decipher the chemical compounds of the costly medicine, more people will take advantage of the low price of the medicine since the whole industry will be enabled to produce without investing too many funds in research. If artificial intelligence can be shared with the masses by some Internet magnates, our live standards can be improved significantly owing to the share technologies.
However, it is undeniable that if all of the discoveries are shared with the public, this process will curb the speed of innovation. Our society values creativity and every government in the world proposes to utilize patents to protect the right of inventors. Provided that everything you discovered is supposed to share with others on the spot, you will not possess the power to benefit from the outcomes and will not be motivated to be committed to conducting more in-depth research and have the stimulus to make more innovations. Imagine that you are working in a company devoted to building technologies. Since every new updated material will soon be mimicked by other rivals, your company can not gain profits with ease. The market will be full of free ridings, and thus you and your workmates will lose the motivation to make more progress.
Moreover, it will be out of our control if we share some scientific discoveries that exert detrimental effects on our society and the whole world. The fact of sharing some conducive discoveries may assist the development of our society does not justify that all discoveries have the same effects. If the terrorists are equipped with the method of making guns and weapons, the public will face more crises that pose threat to them. If the evils master the skills to break down the computer systems of some critical governments and companies, our society will encounter more chaotic and urgent situations that cannot be compensated by further remedies. Our lives will be pushed to the edge of collapse, and we will experience uncertainty all day and night.
In a nutshell, since science and technology are still under high-speed development, we should keep in mind that not all findings will bring manifold benefits to our lives and some even should be kept secret. Only in this way, can we facilitate the function of our society with ease and ensure our safety forever.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 35, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...s. However, it is undeniable that if all of the discoveries are shared with the public,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, moreover, so, still, thus, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 26.0 9.8082437276 265% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 65.0 52.1666666667 125% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2403.0 1977.66487455 122% => OK
No of words: 477.0 407.700716846 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03773584906 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67336384929 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74949647163 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 249.0 212.727598566 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.522012578616 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 760.5 618.680645161 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 9.0 3.51792114695 256% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.8132700999 48.9658058833 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.473684211 100.406767564 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1052631579 20.6045352989 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.63157894737 5.45110844103 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.285940083646 0.236089414692 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102877006907 0.076458572812 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0715985497726 0.0737576698707 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185708852813 0.150856017488 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0538297728054 0.0645574589148 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 11.7677419355 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 58.1214874552 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.1575268817 128% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 10.9000537634 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.01818996416 112% => OK
difficult_words: 125.0 86.8835125448 144% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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