Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Although science and technology will continue to improve, the most significant improvement for the quality of people’s lives have already taken place.
Thanks to the scientific and technological advancements, man’s life situation has improved remarkably. After the tremendous recent improvements in welfare, some may say that there is no room for any further growth in the quality of life. I disagree. I believe that we should expect, and will see, extensive improvements in our living standards due to technological and scientific developments for the reasons that I am going to discuss.
First of all, human societies are suffering severe problems in different areas, specifically medicine issues, in which science is going forward to find their solutions to elaborate on our living standards ultimately. Although many deadly diseases are curable now, there is still a considerable number of malfunctions which needs great endeavor of scientists and researchers. Disabilities, genetic disorders, heart diseases, and the rest made some people deprived of a comfortable life. For example, although some HIV patients have been treated, there is still no absolute cure for that. Due to their physical weakness, patients are struggling with even ordinary daily tasks. Regarding the recent results of scientific and technological advancements, there is a bright future for curing this severe illness or at least making their life more comfortable. Furthermore, despite the significant breakthrough in chemotherapy, for treating cancer, which is one of the most deadly and prevalent diseases around the world, there is a wide range of side effects influencing patients’ experiences of life, such as hair-loss, sunlight sensitivity, losing weight, inability for doing routine jobs. So if there is any hope to have a better health condition in our life, it comes from science and technology.
Another noteworthy reason is that scientific and technological achievements may take some time to find a way to people’s life. Some new technological accomplishments are not economically viable at first to reach mass production, but after a while, they will be in service to the public. Besides that, inventing new gadgets or products to affect ordinary life is a painstaking effort that does not occur routinely. Take the radio as an example. For many years there were not any radio receivers, but scientists knew about radiation and its capabilities. After the invention of the radio, television, and other radio transmitting devices, human life has changed profoundly. Furthermore, brilliant Einstein’s theory of specific relativity did not come in handy for decades. Nobody has ever thought that such theoretical knowledge might have any slightest effect on ordinary people’s lives, but now individuals’ location is easy to find using the GPS. Thanks to that marvelous theory, GPS satellites are capable of correcting time dilation happening to their super-sensitive clocks. So although it takes time to benefit from technology and science, it definitely will.
All in all, I believe that science and technology will have living standards higher because there are so many problems which scientists are working on it and they will find solutions, as they did until now. Moreover, it must be considered that great leaps in human quality of life have never been that common in human history; they need time to be beneficial for the public.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, furthermore, if, may, moreover, regarding, so, still, while, at least, for example, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 15.1003584229 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2778.0 1977.66487455 140% => OK
No of words: 512.0 407.700716846 126% => OK
Chars per words: 5.42578125 4.8611393121 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.75682846001 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09744689157 2.67179642975 116% => OK
Unique words: 279.0 212.727598566 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544921875 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 866.7 618.680645161 140% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.476811164 48.9658058833 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.782608696 100.406767564 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2608695652 20.6045352989 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.47826086957 5.45110844103 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216658584903 0.236089414692 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0542899198363 0.076458572812 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0436959882792 0.0737576698707 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139653635356 0.150856017488 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0406130543374 0.0645574589148 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 11.7677419355 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 58.1214874552 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 10.1575268817 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.51 10.9000537634 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.01818996416 115% => OK
difficult_words: 146.0 86.8835125448 168% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 10.002688172 150% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.247311828 146% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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