Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
For any business to be successful, it must spend a lot of money on advertising.
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
For any business to be successful, it must spend a lot of money on advertising.
There is no doubt that advertising has a prominent role in every business. Due to its paramount importance, efforts for elevating its effectiveness has been always amongst businessmen's top priorities. No one can deny the direct and indirect effects of advertising in selling products. A controversial question which is often raised regarding this issue is whether for having good selling product must spend a lot of money on advertising or not? Some people believe that companies should spend a lot of budget on this way. However, some others take an opposite view. I, despite the general consensus, contend that the first view carries more weight. In what following, I am going to aptly delve into my perspective.
First of all, one should take into account the fact that most of people spend a lot of their time on social media. One way that the business can show their products is that advertise in this way. So the company must spend a lot of money for show and indicate the positive view of their products to people. In the social media, people write their comment and idea about products. So it is very vital that one product investigate in this way to show itself as good as possible. The result of a recent study in my country indicates that 78 percent read other people's comments on product. So the company must spend a lot of money in social media to show their products.
The second reason that I would like to bring about this topic is that customer do not know about a new product. They do not know about the positive effect of one product. So companies should advertise their new product to introduce it to people. They must indicate good view of their product. Although, most of advertisements are exaggerate. On the other hand, the company must advertise also their old products, if they want to stay in the market. For people when see an old product, it can be nostalgic for them and persuade them to buy it. Take an personal experience as an example, When I see a advertisement about an old chips that produce from 50 years, I remember my childhood and it is encouraged me to buy it.
The last but not least reason by which the claim is justified is that celebrities have an indisputable effect on viewpoint of people. The companies can use famous people to introduce their product. Most of people buy one product because of their celebrities advise it. They think it is very good product because he or she like it. For example, when one superstar advertise one T-shirt, her lover buy that product, for they think that they look like her. As most of income of celebrities in this way and their wage is very expensive, the companies must spend a lot of money in this way. Psychologist have conducted many studies which show that it has a good result for buy one product, when people see other people who like them buy it. In the celebrities case, they do not think about the product, because they believe that it is the best product.
From what has been discussed above, we may safely reach the conclusion that advertisements have a vital role in all of business. According to successful business, all of them use in this way. For example the apple company is one of the most popular company in the world and most of people know it in technology field. But this company advertise their new product to people. Consequently, it is highly recommended that companies must use the newest way of advertising and employ the professional people in this field to help them in success way.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 582, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'consensus'.
Suggestion: consensus
...s take an opposite view. I, despite the general consensus, contend that the first view carries mo...
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Line 6, column 58, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
... should take into account the fact that most of people spend a lot of their time on social med...
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Line 8, column 294, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...st indicate good view of their product. Although, most of advertisements are exaggerate....
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Line 8, column 304, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the advertisements') or simply say ''most advertisements''.
Suggestion: most of the advertisements; most advertisements
...e good view of their product. Although, most of advertisements are exaggerate. On the other hand, the ...
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Line 8, column 331, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'exaggerated'.
Suggestion: exaggerated
...t. Although, most of advertisements are exaggerate. On the other hand, the company must ad...
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Line 8, column 549, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
... them and persuade them to buy it. Take an personal experience as an example, When...
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Line 8, column 598, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...al experience as an example, When I see a advertisement about an old chips that p...
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Line 10, column 14, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[3]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'not the least'.
Suggestion: not the least
...ncouraged me to buy it. The last but not least reason by which the claim is justified ...
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Line 10, column 199, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'Most of', you should use 'the' ('Most of the people') or simply say ''Most people''.
Suggestion: Most of the people; Most people
...mous people to introduce their product. Most of people buy one product because of their celebr...
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Line 12, column 275, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
...e most popular company in the world and most of people know it in technology field. But this c...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, however, if, look, may, regarding, second, so, for example, no doubt, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 9.8082437276 173% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 26.0 11.0286738351 236% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 85.0 43.0788530466 197% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 86.0 52.1666666667 165% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3009.0 1977.66487455 152% => OK
No of words: 643.0 407.700716846 158% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67962674961 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.03561760524 4.48103885553 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62768174307 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 250.0 212.727598566 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.388802488336 0.524837075471 74% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 936.9 618.680645161 151% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 38.0 20.6003584229 184% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.904936193 48.9658058833 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.1842105263 100.406767564 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9210526316 20.6045352989 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 5.45110844103 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.53405017921 154% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 20.0 11.8709677419 168% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 14.0 4.88709677419 286% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20045737606 0.236089414692 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0644119080525 0.076458572812 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.132614546436 0.0737576698707 180% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.220316054724 0.150856017488 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.231944707983 0.0645574589148 359% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 11.7677419355 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 10.9000537634 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.96 8.01818996416 87% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 86.8835125448 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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