Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Because modern life is very complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
The question mentioned above presents an arbitrary choice regarding the attitude toward living. Some people inline to face the life by planning and organizing previously while others prefer to face it by instinct. In the following essay, I will explain why I agree with this viewpoint.
To begin with, as the article said, modern life is very complex with rapid changing. Under this situation, making a good plan can avoid mistakes. Moreover, even sometimes the mistakes still happen, having a good plan can lead you not to be so nervous. My brother's experience can be an opposite example. He is the one who usually do the decision with a lack of vision. Consequently, after entering university, he discovered the major he selected does not match his interests and it also becomes gradually out of day for the job market.
Furthermore, sometimes the unexpected thing occurs, and the ability to plan and organize can help you conquer the flexibility of world. Making plan does not mean to be strict or rigid, but to think the possible consequence before it happens. Take myself for example, I always expect there will be some unpredictable consequence, and prepare for it. By doing so, I can remain ground and stable if it truly occurs in my life.
Finally, in the modern world, a plenty of possible choices are set there, waiting for people to select. However, since there are too many choices, numerous people become anxious, owing to the fact that we never know which one is the best. In my point of view, I owe the circumstance to the problem of lacking imagination, since they are not able to imagine a concrete picture of future. For the sake solving the problem, the ability of planning and organizing is necessary, for the reason that the ability of imagining depends on it. By planning, you can paint a picture of future in your mind. Even if it may be unrealistic sometime, it can help you make a decision that you are not willing to regret.
Given the reason above, I totally hold the belief on the statement. The ability of planning and organizing contributes to avoid mistakes, reduce the uncertainty and look into the future. As a result, I firmly believe that the ability of planning and organizing is necessary toward the modern life.
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- TPO 64 85
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- tpo 65 76
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, finally, furthermore, however, if, look, may, moreover, regarding, so, still, while, even so, for example, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1876.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 388.0 407.700716846 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83505154639 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43821085614 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66645354216 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559278350515 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 614.7 618.680645161 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.94265232975 223% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.4612446886 48.9658058833 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.2727272727 100.406767564 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6363636364 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.18181818182 5.45110844103 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.294882010609 0.236089414692 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0776893981439 0.076458572812 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0593030124302 0.0737576698707 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156502258655 0.150856017488 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0275188347815 0.0645574589148 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 11.7677419355 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 86.8835125448 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.