I believe that packaging tours are the most effective way to travel so I agree with the presented statement. I will explore the reasons in the following paragraphs.
Firstly, we can save both time and money if we choose a group tour. A private tour costs a vast amount of money because we have to It also makes us annoying to spare time to prepare for the trip. We have to reserve restaurant seats or book a hotel room all by ourselves. This process might be done through the internet but using online services may be pregnant with security problems.Therefore, in order to economize on time and money, I prefer a group tour to a private tour.
In addition, we can make friends with other participants. We visit different places and have meals for a few days with all the members together, which would strengthen the ties among them, facilitating their conversation. My experience in Italy was a compelling example of this. When I was eight years old, my parents and I applied to a guided tour to Italy and spent a week there. I first felt lonely because I was astonished by the mere fact that nobody talked my native language in another country. However, in a day or two, I found a boy of my age in the group and tried to talk to him. As we got to know each other, our friendship was fostered. It is mesmerizing that we are still in contact. Drawing from this experience, we might happen to know our future friends.
Lastly, and most importantly, we do not have to bother to make a plan. Some people may find it interesting to make their own itinerary, but I am reluctant to make detailed plans. It is troublesome as well to check train hours or bus hours. It might be the case that hotel managers offer a different accommodation fee from what I had expected it to be. On the other hand, being in a group makes us feel easy, for we do not have to consider all those things. A tour conductor leads us everywhere we are to go, and they can even explain the significance of historical monuments or paintings.
These three reasons all support my viewpoint that the best way to travel is to get involved in a packaged tour.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... vast amount of money because we have to It also makes us annoying to spare time ...
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Suggestion: Therefore
... may be pregnant with security problems.Therefore, in order to economize on time and mone...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, lastly, may, so, still, then, therefore, well, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 55.0 43.0788530466 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1741.0 1977.66487455 88% => OK
No of words: 390.0 407.700716846 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.4641025641 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44391917772 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71991341665 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561538461538 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 553.5 618.680645161 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 19.0 9.59856630824 198% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.4265963336 48.9658058833 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.1363636364 100.406767564 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7272727273 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.31818181818 5.45110844103 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176069865052 0.236089414692 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0501313621818 0.076458572812 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.065058987635 0.0737576698707 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136437694174 0.150856017488 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0905506190574 0.0645574589148 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 11.7677419355 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.29 10.9000537634 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.39 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 86.8835125448 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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