Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
The best way to travel is in a group led by a tour guide.
Traveling is one of the best ways to have an ideal recreation in holidays or leisure times and human beings can get rid of daily tension and stress in these travels. Although many people prefer to have solely travel, others think that traveling with a tour leader among a group is more efficient and If I wanted to choose between two different types of trips, I would tend to be in a group with a tour leader, as people can know more and accurately about that place; besides, they can have more fun.
To begin with, the first reason coming to my mind is that a tour guide is well-informed and can give exact information expeditiously about the history of different monuments or historical events; however, if people search solely, they might acquire unreliably wrong answers or they would inform so little. For example, when my friends and I had traveled to Yerevan we had a tour guide who informed us greatly about diverse monuments, but when I searched about them on the net, I could not find all the information which she gave; therefore, we were so happy due to having an expert person and if we had not had a tour guide, we could not have acquired certifiably or completed information.
Finally, it is worth mentioning that in a group people can talk to each other or dance with each other and create a great number of common memorizes that lead to the creation of new friendships. unfold the possibility to have more fun in comparison with traveling lonely; moreover, owing to knowing all the place by a tour guide, he or she can unfold the possibility to bring all the travelers to appropriate places which can satisfy their preference in terms of economically, environment, entertainment, etc and make a pleasurable trip for them, and also since tour guides bring people to safe places which are likely to have fewer bag snatchers or muggers, people have less stress and worries, so they just focus on the present and have fun.
By way of conclusion, it appears to me that traveling by a knowledgable person like a tour guide can make a trip not only more useful and informative but also more pleasurable for people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 195, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Unfold
...ead to the creation of new friendships. unfold the possibility to have more fun in com...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, finally, first, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, for example, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 13.8261648746 159% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1752.0 1977.66487455 89% => OK
No of words: 376.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65957446809 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40348946061 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67983242214 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.534574468085 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 558.9 618.680645161 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 20.6003584229 34% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 53.0 20.1344086022 263% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 126.324331523 48.9658058833 258% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 250.285714286 100.406767564 249% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 53.7142857143 20.6045352989 261% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 15.1428571429 5.45110844103 278% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178051024139 0.236089414692 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0921184667504 0.076458572812 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0333392008454 0.0737576698707 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12143509449 0.150856017488 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0354834050131 0.0645574589148 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 27.4 11.7677419355 233% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 26.14 58.1214874552 45% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 22.8 10.1575268817 224% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 10.64 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.54 8.01818996416 119% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 86.8835125448 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 10.002688172 170% => OK
gunning_fog: 23.2 10.0537634409 231% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 23.0 10.247311828 224% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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