Do you agree or disagree with the following statement At universities and colleges sports and social activities are just as important as classes and libraries and should receive equal financial support Use specific reasons and examples to support your ans

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it is generally believed that at universit...
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...dying rather than sport activities, but i tend to agree with this idea that in ed...
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...end equal money for both fields because i think people should improve in many fie...
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...e in many fields in their personal life.Moreover ,if ones have talent in sports or socia...
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...y fields in their personal life.Moreover ,if ones have talent in sports or social ...
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...ocial activities, they can find it then improve it.These activities also can make peopl...
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...ities, they can find it then improve it.These activities also can make people happier...
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...so can make people happier and healthier . To begin with ,the first reason coming...
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... have lots of problems in the real world .In fact, everything that ones want to le...
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...social activities or they can not learn swimming ,if they do not swim.They will face rel...
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...ctivities or they can not learn swimming ,if they do not swim.They will face relat...
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... spend enough time for their friendships also they can not have good relationship...
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... other activities besides their studying ,they will get more energy to have an eff...
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...e energy to have an efficient study, so i think as they spend more time in sports...
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...can achieve high grades on their courses . Moreover, it should not be left unsaid...
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...an find their talents and their passions,if they try different sport activities or ...
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...t sport activities or social activities.If someone has talent or passion in for e...
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...ivities.If someone has talent or passion in for example playing tennis,they can ...
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...alent or passion in for example playing tennis,they can spend time more on it an...
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...on it and choose teaching playing tennis as their career in the future, or if som...
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...assed, so they will achieve success too.They have good feeling about themselves beca...
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... life and how can be a successful person . Finally, It is worth mentioning that p...
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...o exercise more and have social activity they have healthier body and they are a ...
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...ion and negative feelings in any person.For example doctors always recommend to doi...
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...h exercise they will have tough old age.They get old sooner ,so they can not enjoy e...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, finally, first, if, may, moreover, so, then, thus, as to, for example, i think, in fact, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 22.0 9.8082437276 224% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 25.0 13.8261648746 181% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 72.0 43.0788530466 167% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2531.0 1977.66487455 128% => OK
No of words: 523.0 407.700716846 128% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83938814532 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.78217453174 4.48103885553 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55196042052 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 228.0 212.727598566 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.435946462715 0.524837075471 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 774.0 618.680645161 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 20.6003584229 29% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 87.0 20.1344086022 432% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 239.682196993 48.9658058833 489% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 421.833333333 100.406767564 420% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 87.1666666667 20.6045352989 423% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 20.3333333333 5.45110844103 373% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 36.0 5.5376344086 650% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.104219327813 0.236089414692 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0807621428521 0.076458572812 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0435954485774 0.0737576698707 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0807621428521 0.150856017488 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0435954485774 0.0645574589148 68% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 45.0 11.7677419355 382% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -8.37 58.1214874552 -14% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 6.10430107527 239% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 36.0 10.1575268817 354% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 11.98 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.52 8.01818996416 131% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 86.8835125448 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 30.0 10.002688172 300% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 36.8 10.0537634409 366% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 30.0 10.247311828 293% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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