Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Boys and girls should attend separate schools. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
“It is time that we all see gender as a spectrum instead of two sets of opposing ideals,” Emma Watson, a noted British actor, once said. People may not link it with forcing females and males to go to separate schools. Still, if you look deeper, you will find that attending single-sex schools barely has any connotation , no matter how people glorify it.
Everyone must understand or at least hear about the past unequal treatment between women and men. Men would learn to become workers, merchants, or other professionals jobs when they grew up. On the other hand, women were made to take care of the family other than work, not allowed to pursue their own careers. How is it different from forbidding boys and girls to attend separate schools? However, women nowadays have equal rights with men, so boys and girls deserve to participate in coeducational schools. Everyone must have the same access to knowledge and experience. Many females have spoken up to help subside the inequality between boys and girls. Malala Yousafzai began blogging about life under the Taliban, speaking out directly against their threats to close girls’ schools.
Although the number of single-sex school schools is decreasing, there are still some because of tradition. But haven’t people seen that attending coed school benefits females and males? When boys and girls study together, they learn how to communicate with each other and how to work in a team. Learning to communicate is vital because they know how to cooperate, which is opposite to sex, and can prepare for life after school. In addition, it promotes an atmosphere of competition between boys and girls in studies, builds passion for work, and encourages them to show their skills in learning.
Yet, opponents may refute that research back up that teachers tend to pay more attention and interact more with boys than girls. As a result, Boys boys and girls should go to separate schools, so boys will not affect girls’ studies and grades. Thus, according to recent research, female students are less confident and are likely to be shy around male students in some subjects like Math, science, technology, etc. Therefore, they should not attend the same school . However, if they are in the same school, they may help each other.
Clearly, boys and girls should attend coeducational schools because of mutual benefits. Let us eliminate single-sex schools; then, fewer educational problems will exist. People should not believe that boys and girls are different.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, may, so, still, then, therefore, thus, at least, in addition, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 43.0788530466 58% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2108.0 1977.66487455 107% => OK
No of words: 414.0 407.700716846 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09178743961 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51076378781 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52069375459 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 244.0 212.727598566 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589371980676 0.524837075471 112% => OK
syllable_count: 623.7 618.680645161 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.0689090952 48.9658058833 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.8333333333 100.406767564 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.25 20.6045352989 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.83333333333 5.45110844103 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224044664132 0.236089414692 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0732174270989 0.076458572812 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0741342286279 0.0737576698707 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137910837748 0.150856017488 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0341844604344 0.0645574589148 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 11.7677419355 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 86.8835125448 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.