do you agree or disagree with the following statement? educating children is a more difficult task today than it was in the past because they spend so much time on cell phone, online games, and social networking website. use specific reasons and examples to support your answers.
That education is one of the most important parts of our life is obvious especially during childhood and education plays a crucial role in childhood is an undeniable fact. Should experts realize the significance of education in our life, the ponder over its importance much more scrupulously. Education of children has recently been the topic of debate among psychologists.
I belive that, if children spend a little time on cell phone and other time-consuming entertainments, they will educate better. it is well-established fact that online games have a negative influence on the behavior of children., and these are my justification, to begin with, although cell phones have advantages in our life, they have a negative influence in our children. for instance, my sister has a daughter and she is 6 years old. she squanders most of her time by playing online game. therefore she does not talk to her parents. my sister complains to negative influence cell phone on her baby, The second reason why I advocate this points of view liaising the fact that in spite of the fact that social networks make communication better around people and we can talk all around the world, communication network destroys relationships among family. Thus, children can not learn from their parents, the last but nor the last I love children, when I see them, I like to embrace and kiss them but they don't pay attention to me because they play game.
having discussed the issue from that point of view, I would rather look at it from another perspective as well, we know that a coin has two sides so new technology may have positive influence in our children such as educational games on smartphones. but it's disadvantages for outweigh it's disadvantages.
By taking all above-mentioned arguments into consideration, following conclusion can drown about the issue, underestimating the disadvantages of new electrical technologist on education of children is not logical. attending to this issue meticulously contributes to making use of them effectively, and can improve several aspects of the behavior of children.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, may, second, so, therefore, thus, well, for instance, such as, in spite of, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.0752688172 211% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1758.0 1977.66487455 89% => OK
No of words: 342.0 407.700716846 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14035087719 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17189877333 2.67179642975 119% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.584795321637 0.524837075471 111% => OK
syllable_count: 554.4 618.680645161 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 84.0006073836 48.9658058833 172% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.571428571 100.406767564 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4285714286 20.6045352989 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.42857142857 5.45110844103 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200330191503 0.236089414692 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0629378272111 0.076458572812 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0509005994854 0.0737576698707 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0980153050828 0.150856017488 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0540789648448 0.0645574589148 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 11.7677419355 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 58.1214874552 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.1575268817 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 10.9000537634 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 86.8835125448 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 10.002688172 125% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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