Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Educating children is a more difficult task today than it was in the past because they spend so much time on cell phone, online games, and social networking Web site.
The new technologies sometimes bring new problems to different areas and also education. It raises the question that is it a more difficult task today than it was in the past. I hold the belief that it becomes a tougher task since the children spend too many times on the new technology.
Because of the development of the technology, the children in the modern society can easily get the information through the internet, so they can use it to challenge the teacher on the class, which makes the education become a more difficult task now. Take my sister's son for example. He is an elementary student now and is curious about nature. So in the school, when the teacher teaches the subject such as how the earth formed or the water cycle, he will use his smartphone to search the information about that subject in the whole class. And if he finds something different from what the teacher is telling, he will raise the hand up to ask the question. Because he keeps asking the questions to challenge the textbooks and disturbing the teachers' lectures, the teacher always feels angry and puncture my sister's son. On the contrary, in the past, I did not have the smartphone, so in the class, I always believed our teachers were correct and not asked any question.
Furthermore, in the past, parents did not need to worry that the children would meet the online friends. It is dangerous that the children go to meet the online friends by themselves because we cannot really understand the people behind the internet. Take my friend's daughter Penny for example. When she was a high school student, he indulged on the internet and made many friends in the online game. And one day, she cheated on her parents that she went to meet her elementary school's classmates. But actually, she was going to meet the friends who she made on the online game. At first, her parents did not find any problem, but when her daughter did not come home after the 12 o'clock at night, my friend felt worried and called the police for help. Thankfully, they found Penny was locked in a public toilet and those "online friends" rubbed her belongings away.
Many people may argue that the different generations have different educational difficulties, so educating children is not a more difficult task than it was in the past. In other words, in the past, we still need to face other problem. However, I insist that because of the cellphone, online game and other new technologies which did not appear in the past, so the parents and the teachers are not familiar with them, causing the education to become much tougher in this generation.
In conclusion, I take the position that educating children is a more difficult task today than before because not only the children can easily challenge the teachers but also the parents need to worry more online issues than before.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 681, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: o'clock
...daughter did not come home after the 12 oclock at night, my friend felt worried and ca...
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Line 9, column 234, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...o worry more online issues than before.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, may, really, so, still, for example, in conclusion, such as, in other words, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 43.0788530466 118% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2373.0 1977.66487455 120% => OK
No of words: 497.0 407.700716846 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77464788732 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.72159896747 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57756766782 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 227.0 212.727598566 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.456740442656 0.524837075471 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 722.7 618.680645161 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 9.59856630824 177% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.4747142805 48.9658058833 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.863636364 100.406767564 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5909090909 20.6045352989 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.63636363636 5.45110844103 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246109507007 0.236089414692 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0754007456062 0.076458572812 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0871283042836 0.0737576698707 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168815442755 0.150856017488 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.072721852423 0.0645574589148 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.36 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 86.8835125448 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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