Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Educating children is a more task today than it was in the past because they spend so much time on cell phones, online games, and social networking websites.
The educational system and educating children has been argued over centuries, and its difficulties changed based on social conditions. These days, some scientists believe that educating students has become harder than in the past due to social networks, internet environments, and gaming which are unseparated parts of the children. This essay will discuss that why this opinion is completely true and provide a series of reasons.
First of all, most of the students cannot manage their time and do not allocate sufficient time and energy to their assignments. Different social networks, games, weblogs, and websites have become very attractive over time. Students feel very excited when they use them and work with them for a long time. This, of course, takes so much time and energy. Because their time is limited, they are not able to schedule properly and work on their education. For instance, research is published in 2016 in Turkey, which indicated that about 65 percent of the students in that country spent more than 60 hours weekly playing games and less than 15 hours on their class assignments.
Second, the students who spend much of their time in these environments often do not have a wealthy body, which leads to a less strong mind than the past children. In the past, the children often read books in their spare time and developed their minds. They also played sports and work on their organs by improving the blood cycle in their body, which causes to increase in the number of nerves in the brain. The nerves are responsible for learning new tasks and memorizing abilities. According to a paper published in the journal of Neuro-Research, the number of nerves in the students has become decreased to about a half in the last 25 years. This causes to decrease in learning abilities and in IQ test value of the children.
The last but not the least reason is that these activities kill the curiosity of the children overtimes. Spending too much time on the internet makes the mind lazy and destroys the ability to think. This phenomenon cause that the students become reluctant about their subjects in the schools, and therefore their education become faces important problems. As an example, I can remember when I was a student, most of the students in the class were excited by the new subjects. But two years ago, when I started to teach in elementary schools, the student preferred to spend their time on other things rather than listening to the teacher.
This essay discussed that how spending time on the internet and gaming can affect children's education through disorganizing their time for assignments, decrease the abilities of their brains and kill the students curiosity. To conclude, in my view, educating the students is a much more difficult task than in the past and face a wide range of problems because the students often prefer to spend a large amount of time using cell phones and on the internet visiting the websites social networks or gaming.
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Suggestion: decreasing
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, therefore, for instance, of course, first of all, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 13.8261648746 174% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 71.0 52.1666666667 136% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2485.0 1977.66487455 126% => OK
No of words: 504.0 407.700716846 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93055555556 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.73813722054 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5794253656 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 242.0 212.727598566 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.480158730159 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 747.9 618.680645161 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.3372555565 48.9658058833 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.954545455 100.406767564 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9090909091 20.6045352989 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.27272727273 5.45110844103 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264416786056 0.236089414692 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0810121908885 0.076458572812 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0648569590641 0.0737576698707 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165182812426 0.150856017488 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0662751412478 0.0645574589148 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 11.7677419355 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 10.9000537634 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 86.8835125448 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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