Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: the environmental problem is too complex and cannot be handled by individuals.
As modern society develops, people have an easier life than they did in the past. However, negative sides often comes with the progress. People have to deal with tons of environmental issues.The government and non-governmental organizations encourage individuals to do something good for our mother nature. Some people, however, argue that individuals’ impact is so limited that they cannot handle the problem. As far as I am concerned, small efforts at individual level could go a long way in protecting the environment.
First and foremost, individuals can protect the environment by raising the environmental protection awareness among the youth. It is a really sad story that the majority of teenagers today do not even think about the environment, not to mention fixing it. According to the official statistics released by China Daily, nearly 70 per cent of the youth find it unfashionable to carry cloth bags to market. They prefer poly bags and never hesitate to throw plastics and garbage on the road. Therefore, the first thing individuals can do for our environment is letting themselves know much about the environment, is spring up their urge to be eco-friendly.
Moreover, the ordinary can preserve the mother nature by reducing the use of technological devices. The addiction with these smart devices is absolutely an adversity for people, especially the youth. Diminishing the use of technological devices, laptops, smart phones, iPods and even cars, will not only reduce the electricity and petrol, which is non-renewable resource of energy, but also grant the flower of the country, teenagers, a greater chance of getting back to the nature. If individuals can never hesitate to throw their technological devices at home, they go out and do something good for the environment, like planting trees, picking up the trash on the road. The traffic condition will be better; the limited resource of energy will be saved; the awareness of saving the environment will be lifted up. And the environment will become better and better.
Finally, individuals can protect the environment by launching educational campaigns among themselves, such as the Earth Day, to stress the government to do something for our beloved earth. For example, during the Earth Day 2006 in America, millions of individuals flocked into the road and raised the slogans ”Trees are you. Do not cut them” , “Protect our crying mother earth” and so on, expressing their strong desire to protect the environment toward the government, politicians and businessmen. And after this great campaign, the government did plant more trees for earth and big companies did produce more recyclable and greener products.
In a nutshell, there is no reason to draw the conclusion that the environmental problem is too complex and cannot be handled by individuals.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'finally', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'moreover', 'really', 'so', 'therefore', 'for example', 'such as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.255238095238 0.229887763892 111% => OK
Verbs: 0.144761904762 0.158761421928 91% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0666666666667 0.0866891130778 77% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0685714285714 0.046263068375 148% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0361904761905 0.0685040099705 53% => OK
Prepositions: 0.102857142857 0.118717715034 87% => OK
Participles: 0.0380952380952 0.0351676179071 108% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.09451962873 2.67179642975 116% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0266666666667 0.0309702414327 86% => OK
Particles: 0.00761904761905 0.00188951952338 403% => OK
Determiners: 0.100952380952 0.0887237588012 114% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0247619047619 0.0209618222197 118% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00190476190476 0.0139019557991 14% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2870.0 2387.08602151 120% => OK
No of words: 453.0 408.028673835 111% => OK
Chars per words: 6.33554083885 5.86048508987 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61343653406 4.48200974243 103% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.388520971302 0.338922669872 115% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.302428256071 0.251872472559 120% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.225165562914 0.174417080927 129% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.172185430464 0.112833075102 153% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09451962873 2.67179642975 116% => OK
Unique words: 255.0 212.727598566 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.562913907285 0.524397521467 107% => OK
Word variations: 68.1049030368 59.2087087015 115% => OK
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6684587814 102% => OK
Sentence length: 21.5714285714 20.5533526081 105% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.6890669019 48.84282405 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.666666667 120.699889404 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5714285714 20.5533526081 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.571428571429 0.644075263715 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.54480286738 90% => OK
Readability: 51.8142541785 45.7405998639 113% => OK
Elegance: 1.58778625954 1.45489161554 109% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.418120940088 0.300154397459 139% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0992436067581 0.103427244359 96% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0735128876638 0.0752933317313 98% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.570436950324 0.497263757937 115% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.140958794937 0.151897553556 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.171696220423 0.114077575197 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0870417637485 0.0781384742642 111% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.38000395087 0.336927656856 113% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.121274844072 0.067059652881 181% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.307456211311 0.210909579961 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0909643004812 0.0618886996521 147% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8870967742 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.86379928315 129% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.91756272401 102% => OK
Positive topic words: 4.0 8.42114695341 47% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.4623655914 41% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.75985663082 36% => OK
Total topic words: 6.0 13.6433691756 44% => More topic words wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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