Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Games are as important for adults as they are for children. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
I strongly disagree with the statement that the sports and social activities of university and colleges should receive equal financial support as classes and libraries. Although it is right that the students and teachers are always busy in academic studies, sports and social activities have the function of stress relief and improve friendship among students and staff of university, it is not meant such sports and social activities deserves equal financial support with academic things. university and colleges is a institute where academic studies and education of students is the core, and usually the financial budget is limited, so the rational of financial distribution is important. I will examine below the specific reasons for distributing most of fund to academic areas is significant.
it is well-know that the expenditure of academic studies and education is numerous and the financial budget is limited. The public university’s major expenditure is support by the government and the private university is support by students’ tuition, neither of the financial funds is plenty. Comparing to most business companies, the revenue of the university is poor. so the most funds should be used as the main purpose of university.
Apart from the sport university, the main tasks of most university are academic researches and the education of students. As the point discussed above, the fund is limited and expenditure of researches and education is numerous, if the sport and social activities receive equal financial support there is no doubt that the main tasks of university might be ceased by shortage of funds.
In addition, if a university can attain sufficient funds for building athletic fields and organizing social activities, there is no reason to do so. First, the main reason of most people attend university is getting more education, not entertainment. Second, the researches in science and technology is the main assignment for graduate students and professors, and the process of researches is heavy, so they do not have enough time to enjoy other entertain facilities.
Last, in my view, the academic education will always be the heart of a university. The students should not divert attention from lots of entertain activities, so that they can achieve their final academic goals. For this reason I discussed above, I maintain that university and colleges should not spend large number of money in entertain activities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 445, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to equal'
Suggestion: to equal
...h sports and social activities deserves equal financial support with academic things....
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Line 1, column 491, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: University
...financial support with academic things. university and colleges is a institute where acade...
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Line 1, column 518, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...emic things. university and colleges is a institute where academic studies and ed...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...nd to academic areas is significant. it is well-know that the expenditure of ac...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
... the revenue of the university is poor. so the most funds should be used as the ma...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, so, well, apart from, in addition, no doubt, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 15.1003584229 172% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 13.8261648746 166% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 43.0788530466 42% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2086.0 1977.66487455 105% => OK
No of words: 387.0 407.700716846 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39018087855 4.8611393121 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43534841618 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98603828295 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.43669250646 0.524837075471 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 659.7 618.680645161 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 8.0 3.08781362007 259% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.0098510787 48.9658058833 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.375 100.406767564 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1875 20.6045352989 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.9375 5.45110844103 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.12339942277 0.236089414692 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0470397968584 0.076458572812 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.046597319651 0.0737576698707 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.072241191276 0.150856017488 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.04258291599 0.0645574589148 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 11.7677419355 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 58.1214874552 67% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.1575268817 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.28 10.9000537634 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 86.8835125448 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 10.002688172 200% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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