Do you agree or disagree with the following statement “It is better to be a follower than a leader” use specific reasons and examples to support your answer?
I suppose this idea that follower is better than a leader for several reasons which include having responsible for followers, managing members of the groups, having to plan for future, making match and harmony between members of groups and so on
First of all, in my opinion, the most important character that leads to the following leaders is that leaders should improve and develop their skills in terms of organization, management, and unification which needs to raise their talents. Leaders have to raise their science of management even though they are in a certain way. For instance, since I studied in high school my teacher gave me responsible for a leader in class I have found the best way for management and organization in class.
leaders always need to have new skills and knowledge because they have to find problems out and then they can figure the solutions out, another reason is that followers have a lower chance for a mistake and wrong way but leaders always blame why they can’t find the best way, leaders need to organize and to manage groups who have different kinds of characters in different circumstances, therefore, they must think very quickly and wisely, other reasons include responsible that leaders keep the follower under the control because
For example, one of the most importantly responsible for leaders considers making decisions when all the members of the group meet problems, dangers, difficulties. Leaders should have been able to manage and problems in groups in order to find solutions. In this case, I have taken a strong dislike to one of the leaders who are not perceived as one of the best solutions for their followers these leaders usually are in poor taste. I always have liked to follow leaders who have exemplary manners which are difficult for me leading and not following. It’s not fair to expect leaders or parents to do everything in the family. I believe that various factors have an impact on a leader’s management. Moreover, For instance, two years ago when I wanted to visit my leader in company for the first time then it was beginning to dawn on me.
Leaders usually have challenged with both of the followers and plans and then they must decide under the circumstances of followers. In this case, I think that it is so difficult a decision imaginable for them.
Second, as a matter of fact, leaders have attempted to show themselves that they don’t need to increase their experiences and understandings, I mean they don’t want to share everything who believe for the purpose of having a relationship with followers. I think that gradually they have to change their behaviors because they will not be able to come back to followers.
Third, I believe that leaders play important roles in assign a label of groups, in my opinion, leaders have so difficult duty and also they can be able to match their members in their group. They have presented yourselves in meeting and showing how can control everything. For example, my boss in the office who was a leader of me and my coworker said if I am all feeling good and relaxed after the break, let’s get on with the meeting. None of the followers, applying was accepted by leaders because they didn’t pay attention to criticism.
In conclusion, some of the most important things jump to the conclusion.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, second, so, then, therefore, third, for example, for instance, i mean, i suppose, i think, in conclusion, as a matter of fact, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 20.0 11.0286738351 181% => OK
Pronoun: 62.0 43.0788530466 144% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 78.0 52.1666666667 150% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2797.0 1977.66487455 141% => OK
No of words: 567.0 407.700716846 139% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93298059965 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.87972968509 4.48103885553 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73433342736 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 258.0 212.727598566 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.455026455026 0.524837075471 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 858.6 618.680645161 139% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 29.0 20.1344086022 144% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 155.818880582 48.9658058833 318% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 147.210526316 100.406767564 147% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.8421052632 20.6045352989 145% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.78947368421 5.45110844103 180% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.53405017921 176% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169274801696 0.236089414692 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0669105910633 0.076458572812 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0490905501045 0.0737576698707 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0902541806094 0.150856017488 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0395695154317 0.0645574589148 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 11.7677419355 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 58.1214874552 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.1575268817 132% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.91 10.9000537634 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 86.8835125448 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 10.002688172 185% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.0537634409 135% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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