Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is better for children to choose jobs that are similar to their parents’ jobs than to choose jobs that are very different from their parents’ job. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Since the dawn of civilization, human beings have been taking part in social activities. Hence, the fact that our career plays an important role in our life, is undeniable. This brings up a long-running debate that what career should children choose as their future jobs. A large portion of people believe that children should choose a career according to their interests instead of continuing that of their parents, but some others assert that it is the other way around. From my own perspective, the second notion is true. In what comes next, the reasons why I go for the latter notion are being elaborated.
It is a widely held axiom that human beings prosper in familiar situations and uncanny situations decrease their efficiency. To put it clearer, when children are familiar with a career, they will put their entire focus on the career problems instead of dealing with the pressure of learning new concepts. Since children has been brought up in close contact with their parents career, when they grow up, they are already familiar with the job and know the details. One of my friends, as an instance, has worked with his father since he was nine. Now, his expertise is beyond a person who is going to begin that career. In addition, days of practices has made him a successful sailor without any academic certificate. Also, he trains a lot of people who are coming to him to learn about ships and their navigation system. So, familiarity with a subject and practicing over and over will make one an expert eventually. Hence, children are better to continue their parents career which are grown up with.
Another important point that is worth mentioning is some people believe that continuing parent's career will kill children's creativity. They assert that every child has a distinct talent should be flourished. Although their claim may seem appealing at first, researches show that there are other aspects that should be considered too. According to a research, conducted by Stanford psychologists, only 6 percent of children who choose their dream career become successful. The empirical evidences show that the majority of children who learned a concept when they were a child, can not change their mind for new concepts. Hence, it is highly recommended that children should continue what their parents taught them or do what learned from them.
Considering all aforementioned reasons, we may reach the conclusion that continuing parents career is a good choice for children. However, it is hard to disguise the fact that nowadays careers are changing so fast that the those of parents may vanish but the researched show that children will be more successful if they continue their parents career or those with high similarity to their parents.
- Some people believe that when busy parents do not have a lot of time to spend with their children, the best use of that time is to have fun playing games or sports. Others believe that it is best to use that time doing things together that are related to 63
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is better for children to choose jobs that are similar to their parents’ jobs than to choose jobs that are very different from their parents’ job. Use specific reasons and examples to support y 70
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...our life, is undeniable. This brings up a long-running debate that what career should children...
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Suggestion:
... interests instead of continuing that of their parents, but some others assert th...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'hence', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'second', 'so', 'in addition']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.221343873518 0.229887763892 96% => OK
Verbs: 0.181818181818 0.158761421928 115% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0770750988142 0.0866891130778 89% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0335968379447 0.046263068375 73% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0770750988142 0.0685040099705 113% => OK
Prepositions: 0.120553359684 0.118717715034 102% => OK
Participles: 0.0513833992095 0.0351676179071 146% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.61968415998 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0177865612648 0.0309702414327 57% => OK
Particles: 0.0098814229249 0.00188951952338 523% => OK
Determiners: 0.0849802371542 0.0887237588012 96% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0256916996047 0.0209618222197 123% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0296442687747 0.0139019557991 213% => Maybe 'Which' is overused. If other WH_determiners like 'Who, What, Whom, Whose...' are used too in sentences, then there are no issues.
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2763.0 2387.08602151 116% => OK
No of words: 459.0 408.028673835 112% => OK
Chars per words: 6.01960784314 5.86048508987 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62863751936 4.48200974243 103% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.37908496732 0.338922669872 112% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.254901960784 0.251872472559 101% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.183006535948 0.174417080927 105% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.108932461874 0.112833075102 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61968415998 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 244.0 212.727598566 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.531590413943 0.524397521467 101% => OK
Word variations: 62.4642156374 59.2087087015 105% => OK
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6684587814 111% => OK
Sentence length: 19.9565217391 20.5533526081 97% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.8366391521 48.84282405 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.130434783 120.699889404 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9565217391 20.5533526081 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.434782608696 0.644075263715 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.54480286738 36% => OK
Readability: 45.4467178176 45.7405998639 99% => OK
Elegance: 1.34459459459 1.45489161554 92% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.397214076312 0.300154397459 132% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0875191471518 0.103427244359 85% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0642047262524 0.0752933317313 85% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.430269107908 0.497263757937 87% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.145086272304 0.151897553556 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126362305471 0.114077575197 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0833684630289 0.0781384742642 107% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.349629747455 0.336927656856 104% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0616148795474 0.067059652881 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.284879456713 0.210909579961 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0267780048947 0.0618886996521 43% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8870967742 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.86379928315 52% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.91756272401 183% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 9.0 8.42114695341 107% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.4623655914 81% => OK
Neutral topic words: 8.0 2.75985663082 290% => OK
Total topic words: 19.0 13.6433691756 139% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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