Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is better for children to choose jobs that are similar to their parents' job than to choose jobs that are very different from their parents' job. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In the sophisticated world of today, having a job with sufficient income is a vital requirement of a prosperous life. In this regard, one of the most important decisions children have to make is the field of their occupation. Some people hold the opinion that it is beneficial for juveniles to follow their parents and ancestor’s business, on the other side of the continuum, others believe that children will benefit more from choosing jobs other than their parents’. I, personally speaking, stand with the former group for two main reasons, on which I will elaborate in the next two paragraphs.
First of all, following parents’ occupation would help youngsters to become more successful. Parents have been doing that job for many years and they are familiar with all the fluctuation of the business, so they are adept and skillful in that field. When children choose to pursue their parents’ field of work, they have a big opportunity to use their parents’ significant experiences. Also, one of the common obstacles might happen in a workplace is that coworkers or bosses might look at them as a potential competitor, so they don’t tend to share their experiences. However, this problem will never happen in the family business. So, the more experienced person you have around, the more chance of success you will have.
Secondly, by pursuing their parents’ business, children do not have to start from scratch. Their parents had built a business by spending their lives and devoting themselves to create a prosperous profession. Furthermore, their business is being known and reputable and might have good credit which is a result of those years of effort parents had spent. All of these significant benefits are easily in reach for those who select to pursue their ancestor’s business. For instance, my parents are pharmacists and they have a big and well-known pharmacy in the north of Iran. When my youngest sister had chosen to follow my parents’ path and had finished her study in pharmacology, she already had a successful pharmacy with a lot of credit and experiences.
To conclude, it is remarkably advantageous for children to pursue their parents’ business. Not only does this help them to become more successful, by using their parents’ experiences, but it also makes them needless to start from nothing.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, well, for instance, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1969.0 1977.66487455 100% => OK
No of words: 384.0 407.700716846 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12760416667 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4267276788 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88305479259 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.518229166667 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 585.0 618.680645161 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.5381818321 48.9658058833 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.388888889 100.406767564 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3333333333 20.6045352989 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.77777777778 5.45110844103 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.315800718882 0.236089414692 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105095845467 0.076458572812 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0768413744562 0.0737576698707 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.208791328383 0.150856017488 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0467666043836 0.0645574589148 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 11.7677419355 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 10.9000537634 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 86.8835125448 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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