Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is better to have broad knowledge of many academic subjects than to specialize in one specific subject.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
As the saying goes:"Don't put all the eggs in one basket." Personally, I agree with the statement that it is better to broad knowledge over many academic subjects than specializing in one subject. I feel this way for two reasons, which i will elaborate in the following essay.
First of all, I do have lots of friends in college who have more than one major, and I can totally relate to them. Because future career is much likely connected to your major in university, we college student always eager to seize more opportunities for our future. According to the course selection rules in our school, students have to choose courses beyond their specialize field, which encourages us to encounter different subjects. Take myself as an example, I chose a course from college of commerce as a freshman studied in college of communication, and it made me realize that I had more interest in studying business. Thus, I transferred my department the next year. The idea I want to emphasize is be open to new academic fields but not to confine yourself to the one you think is the best for you.
Secondly, life is short, and we do not have that much time to dive into one academic subject thoroughly since there is no correct answer to most of the questions in those fields. Looking back on the history, people who performed brilliant in specific fields always be recognized after years of their deaths, they spent their whole life on doing the same things, and even couldn't figure out the answer before death. I believe that things are all connected, so do academic subjects. Sometimes you have to change the position and see from another angle to figure out the answers.
In conclusion, I'm of the opinion that it's better to have broad knowledge of many academic subjects . That's because it gives you more opportunities and also helps you see something you couldn't see from specializing one specific subject.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, second, secondly, so, thus, i feel, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1600.0 1977.66487455 81% => OK
No of words: 329.0 407.700716846 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8632218845 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73014831566 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.58358662614 0.524837075471 111% => OK
syllable_count: 505.8 618.680645161 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.4690927317 48.9658058833 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.285714286 100.406767564 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5 20.6045352989 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 5.45110844103 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.379840162496 0.236089414692 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11063533729 0.076458572812 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105600872854 0.0737576698707 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.237926036255 0.150856017488 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0968411344551 0.0645574589148 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 11.7677419355 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 86.8835125448 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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