Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is important to know about events happening around the world, even if it is unlikely that they will affect your daily life. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
The world is changing at a rapid pace, therefore a person should have knowledge about the events that are happening in the world. Some people, believe that it does not make any difference to have the information about world events, as it will not affect their daily matters. However, in my opinion I believe otherwise. I agree with the statement that, it is very essential to have knowlegde about events happening around the world, even it is unlikely that they will affect our daily routine. This is because, it keep us alive. Another reason is, it will help in our development and improve ourselves.
First, if we have information around the globe, we will stay safe and alive. Although whatever is going on our daily life it will not affect us majorly but some how it will keep us safe. For instance, the pandemic of covid-19 started in China. However, then it started to spread in different countries. This happened because,people who were unaware, travelled from and travelled to china were the reason of this spread. Most of the people lost their life in this pandemic . people who were safe and know about this pandemic took precautions about it. The persom safety would not have been possible, if they were not aware about the health guidelines given by CDC and who. These events probably not happen daily but people who survive is because they know the health guidelines and safety rules to stay away from the disease.
Another reason, if a person keep update about the worldly events he can imporve and help in the development in better ways. As everyday advancment in technology has changed the map of the world. For example, if I am a Pharmacist by profession so, it does not mean my studies were finished. Science is developing everyday, so differnet medcine , medicinal research and studies are coming out. If I will not update my information regarding to my profession, I will never improve myself well. It will also affect the health of my patients. although, it will have not affected my routine life with family and friends but certainly damaged my reputation at some stage of life. Therefore, it necessary for a person to have knowledge about world facts.
In conclusion, I more than agree with the statement that a person keep update of the world’s facts. This is because, it will keep them alive, safe, and healthy. Another, it will improve them and help to develop them into a better person.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, regarding, so, then, therefore, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 60.0 43.0788530466 139% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1960.0 1977.66487455 99% => OK
No of words: 417.0 407.700716846 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70023980815 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5189133491 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41684743813 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 212.727598566 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.412470023981 0.524837075471 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 640.8 618.680645161 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 9.59856630824 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 20.6003584229 5% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 417.0 20.1344086022 2071% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 48.9658058833 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1960.0 100.406767564 1952% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 417.0 20.6045352989 2024% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 124.0 5.45110844103 2275% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 11.8709677419 8% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26801699292 0.236089414692 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.26801699292 0.076458572812 351% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0737576698707 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17223139549 0.150856017488 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0806789759625 0.0645574589148 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 209.2 11.7677419355 1778% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -343.32 58.1214874552 -591% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 6.10430107527 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 164.7 10.1575268817 1621% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 11.46 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 26.78 8.01818996416 334% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 65.0 86.8835125448 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 54.0 10.002688172 540% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 168.8 10.0537634409 1679% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 27.0 10.247311828 263% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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