Some people like to travel with a companion. Other people prefer to travel alone. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your choice
Travelling is one of a fun activity .Some people might prefer to travel alone however, I think otherwise. In my opinion, I prefer to travel with a friend. I feel this way for the following reasons which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, going on a long trip with friends makes the jounrey more exciting and jubliant. In fact, during travelling friends play a crucial role in making the trip memorable. Real happiness come through sharing and during travelling sharing thoughts, ideas and things among a friend bring spree. However, people sometimes get bored by travelling alone as they do not have anyone to share their experience with them. To exemplify, I went to the trip in Northern Areas of Pakistan with my friends. . The journey was a great joy and always memorable because our friends and I did so much fun. I remember the moment when we did a hike of eleven kilometers up in the mountains. Then at some high point we sat there with some people that are the locals of that area. They offered us great tea and then we performed a cultural dance with those people. It was very entertaining and fun. We enjoyed a lot and had great time. Consequently, for this reason I always prefer to take a trip with a companion.
In addition, traveling with a companion is a great help which means difficulties during the trip is distributed. When people travel with precarious situation happened and in such cases a friend is a great help. My own experience is a compelling example of this. Few years ago me my sisters and some of our friends went to a trip in Utah. We went for hiking in the mountain during which our friend got slipp and hit her head on the floor. Our friends they took her immediately to the hospital where she got first aid and discharged. When she came back at hotel we took care of her after couple of days she is well enough to continued her journey with us. This would not have been possible if she did not come with her friends.
In conclusion, I asserted to travel with a companion. This is because traveling with friends makes journey more exciting and fun, and because friends are great help in a trip that keep us going.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, however, if, so, then, well, i feel, i think, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 43.0788530466 118% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1783.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 393.0 407.700716846 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.5368956743 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45244063426 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51011122312 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.501272264631 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 538.2 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.4500737239 48.9658058833 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 71.32 100.406767564 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.72 20.6045352989 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.48 5.45110844103 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 11.8709677419 160% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263716546108 0.236089414692 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0858231015531 0.076458572812 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0904774623422 0.0737576698707 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.202554988067 0.150856017488 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0903805412874 0.0645574589148 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 11.7677419355 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 58.1214874552 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.1575268817 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.76 10.9000537634 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.75 8.01818996416 84% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 86.8835125448 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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