Some people like to travel with a companion. Other people prefer to travel alone. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your choice.
Many people feel motivated when the statement is travel. Because they spend the entire year working hard and when the time arrives they relieve the stress and start the journey. For the travel some may enjoy doing it alone, while others like to do it with a partner. In my opinion, I prefer traveling alone than with a partner due to some reasons as I will talk over in this article.
First of all, traveling alone we can make our own itinerant. For instance, last year I decided to visit Paris but my friend wanted to come along. Then, I showed him my schedule and he showed me his. Finally, we decided that it would not be a great idea to go together because our schedule did not match. This example illustrates that traveling alone overweight doing it with someone else.
Moreover, by visiting places alone we may save time and money. For example, ten years ago I was visiting New York. If I had brought my girlfriend with the money would not be enough and the time as well because everything was expensive for two people. This another instance shows that most of time it is better to travel alone .
Finally, I strongly believe that traveling alone overweights traveling with a partner because we can save time and money, and we may schedule our own itinerant.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, if, may, moreover, so, then, well, while, for example, for instance, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 52.1666666667 38% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1040.0 1977.66487455 53% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 227.0 407.700716846 56% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.58149779736 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 4.48103885553 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35893160682 2.67179642975 88% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 212.727598566 62% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.581497797357 0.524837075471 111% => OK
syllable_count: 337.5 618.680645161 55% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.3930737117 48.9658058833 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.2857142857 100.406767564 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2142857143 20.6045352989 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.35714285714 5.45110844103 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247644379286 0.236089414692 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.091530790459 0.076458572812 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0943419677787 0.0737576698707 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156235246548 0.150856017488 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0942903488981 0.0645574589148 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 11.7677419355 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.99 10.9000537634 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.42 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 86.8835125448 49% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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