In many places, students must arrive very early in the morning to attend school. Some people believe that starting the school day early is the best approach to support learning, but others believe that starting the school day at a later time in the morning would be better for students. Which view do you agree with and why?
There is a long debate over whether what is the best time for students to attend the school. In my opinion, I think early morning is the most suitable time for students to go to school. In the following essay I intend to put forth my points to support my view.
The exquisite point to be mentioned is that, at the early morning a person's mind is fresh and it is best time to study. People that wakes up early have more ability to seek and absorb information in it. However, as the day passes on a person mind's activity starts slowing down which also effect their learning ability. To be more specific, according to a research survery in few schools of India researchers observed that students which started their school early, showed better grades. Moreover, these learners achieved high ranks in other cricular activities. On the other hands, students attended shcool at day break have low ability to seek knowledge. They felt more tired throughout the day which also decreased their interests in other activities. Thus, this example elucidates that early morning is the best time for students to begin a school.
In addition, starting the school early teaches discipline to students which is advantageous for them later in their career life. People that have a habit of waking up early, develops a sense of time management in their life that also helps them to stay organized. To exemplify, my school day began later in the morning around 11:30 am. For this reason I developed a habit to stay up late in the morning. When I started the job, it was arduous for me wake up early in the morning and because of this I was always late for my work. Furthermore, at work I often did not able to manage my schedules and meeting with clients. This behavior damaged my reputation and I did not get promotion. This would not have happened if I had a habit of waking up early in the morning.
In conclusion, I couldn't agree more with the statement that early morning is the best time to begin school. This is because, students mind has more capability to absorb information at the dawn, and because it teaches discipline in life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: is the best
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, thus, i think, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 9.8082437276 10% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1753.0 1977.66487455 89% => OK
No of words: 376.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66223404255 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40348946061 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50404691689 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 212.727598566 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.478723404255 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 544.5 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.851748977 48.9658058833 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 83.4761904762 100.406767564 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9047619048 20.6045352989 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.7619047619 5.45110844103 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.368522177392 0.236089414692 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114773662494 0.076458572812 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0884288812283 0.0737576698707 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.23583283124 0.150856017488 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0598912180738 0.0645574589148 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 11.7677419355 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.45 10.9000537634 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 86.8835125448 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 61.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.5 Out of 30
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