Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is important to know about events happening around the world, even if it is unlikely that they will affect your daily life. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Today, there are several new events and discoveries such as wars, vaccines, cell phones, etc happening around the world. People, countries, companies or any other thing could be affected by these things.
First of all, nobody alone in the world, and people usually would be with their friends, their parents or their communities. And, they do some events with people who friend of them in their environments such as buying a cell phone or a computer, going cinema for watching film, travelling places which not seen them, etc. In all these facilities, they must to make decision and their decisions would be true. For good decision-making they should listen their friend who know the world.
Also, wars and military facilities impact so many things where people work, live, trade and any other activities. For example, if there is war in any country there would be a bad economic situation. And, these negative conditions influence life of human. For that reason, although all of them have to know these types of events some people do not care them. At least one of our communities people should know these kind of issues.
In addition, disease problems are improved day by day, and these sich conditions causes many deaths and injuries. And, some members of our countries or our families could be affected by such problems. And, some groups and companies concentrate that solving these problems, and some of these bad ills figured out by them. For their health we have to reach these explorations.
Furthermore, in education life our children needs books, tools, materials which about their schools and their graduations. And, for their students successes they should look and explore events about their education life. And, these findings may not affect their daily life but their children' future impacted by them.
In conclusion, taking account of all above reasons, some members of communities should think that reaching and looking new events. So, I do not agree that statement which knowing events around the world.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 353, Rule ID: MUST_HAVE_TO[1]
Message: After 'must', the verb is used without 'to'. Probably, you should use 'must' or 'have to' here.
Suggestion: must; have to
...hem, etc. In all these facilities, they must to make decision and their decisions would...
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Line 5, column 410, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'these kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
...e of our communities people should know these kind of issues. In addition, disease prob...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, look, may, so, at least, for example, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 52.1666666667 67% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1704.0 1977.66487455 86% => OK
No of words: 333.0 407.700716846 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11711711712 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48836084349 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.555555555556 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 493.2 618.680645161 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.3548640565 48.9658058833 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.2 100.406767564 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.65 20.6045352989 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.55 5.45110844103 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.85842293907 233% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138748136065 0.236089414692 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0527295206337 0.076458572812 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0648077965688 0.0737576698707 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0847450965221 0.150856017488 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0416447822367 0.0645574589148 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.12 10.9000537634 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 86.8835125448 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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