Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is important to know about events happening around the world, even if it is unlikely that they will affect your daily life. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
It is a difficult question to answer because it depends on each person, culture, trends, and demands, but I totally agree that it is important to follow events around the world, even if it is unlikely that they will affect our daily life. I hold this view because of several reasons.
According to my point of view, in such fast-paced modernized societies and by developing technology, we can observe various events and hear different news during the day. Although most of the events probably are not related to our community or more specifically to ourselves, but it is important for people to be aware of occurence that happen around them, because they should be cognizant toward their surroundings that it may have been required them to do something. Besides, people should know what happens around them because they need to get familiar with several solutions in case of crisis, or they should know how to deal with a certain problems when they are faced.
Moreover, being aware of international events enables people to increase their general knowledge. For instance, when you read news on newspaper about interior war in Syria, you are informed that what is going on in Middle East and even what should you do for Syrian people, whether you can send some aids to support them by establishing charity organizations. Therefore, if you do not expose yourself in happening around you, perhaps your life will become boring because you will confront ordinary things in your routine life.
Some people believe that if those news are not related to our personal lives, so, why should we pay attention to them? I will respond to them that when people only put themselves in various conditions, they will become well-experienced and skillful. Thus, if we do not exploit the experiences and knowledge from events happening around us, we cannot improve our ability of managing crisis and dilemma. In other words, without assists and experiences of exterior events, we will not be able to handle our personal problems.
In general, I think that it is important to know about events happening around the world, because they will be beneficial for people and assist them to better resolve their problems, even if those events will not affect their lives directly.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 645, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'problem'?
Suggestion: problem
... should know how to deal with a certain problems when they are faced. Moreover, being a...
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Line 4, column 29, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this news' or 'those newses'?
Suggestion: this news; those newses
...tine life. Some people believe that if those news are not related to our personal lives, ...
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Line 4, column 492, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... exterior events, we will not be able to handle our personal problems. In genera...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well, for instance, i think, in general, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 9.8082437276 184% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 64.0 43.0788530466 149% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1881.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 378.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97619047619 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40933352052 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61570119168 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.526455026455 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 582.3 618.680645161 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.51792114695 227% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.1344086022 144% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 69.9022986814 48.9658058833 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.692307692 100.406767564 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.0769230769 20.6045352989 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.38461538462 5.45110844103 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.351699700938 0.236089414692 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114484843662 0.076458572812 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108678182223 0.0737576698707 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.205064062362 0.150856017488 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0739908947537 0.0645574589148 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 11.7677419355 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 58.1214874552 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.1575268817 132% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.2 10.9000537634 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 86.8835125448 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.0537634409 135% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.