Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is more important to keep your old friends than it is to make new friends.
More people see that old friends are valuable as they understand you and accept your traits; however, it's practical to make new friends than keep others as life is changing with new situations and one needs supporting in each stage.
The first reason I agree with having new friends is existing of different stages one passes by.
During our life, one moves from learning stages to work, each stage he will meet new people and have a higher mature decision to choose his friend characteristics, so he could find others that match with his beliefs and behavior. Based on this, having new friends is something important.
Another reason making new friends is superior to keep the old ones is that one needs help from others. In each step you begin, you will need someone to direct you and this requires strong relationships with people around you, therefore, they could advise you to adapt to the new situation. because each stage craves new directions, one has to accomplish newly good relationships.
Finally, I think that having new friends is the right choice as one will increase his social circle. As meeting new people and making new relations will enhance your position. As a person has a limited view of the world around him, his information will increase by increasing his relatives. They could help him and his family in whatever he needs. For example, if someone needs to establish a new business and doesn't know how to begin, his friends will suggest to him new methods or contact with others. Because they will ease the process for him, I believe that making new friends is the correct one.
In conclusion, my view is making new friends is indispensable as life is changing and also our prospectives, one needs help in each start and increasing social relationships ease life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, however, if, so, therefore, as to, for example, i think, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 52.1666666667 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1503.0 1977.66487455 76% => OK
No of words: 307.0 407.700716846 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89576547231 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5683125078 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 212.727598566 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.508143322476 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 440.1 618.680645161 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.681037099 48.9658058833 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.357142857 100.406767564 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9285714286 20.6045352989 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.57142857143 5.45110844103 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273081888841 0.236089414692 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113474644352 0.076458572812 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0836559708654 0.0737576698707 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170394031397 0.150856017488 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0864906077026 0.0645574589148 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 11.7677419355 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.61 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 86.8835125448 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.