TPO 4
In the lecture, the professor made several points about dinosaurs. The reading passage claims that dinosaurs are Endotherms. However, the professor finds all the ideas implausible and presents some evidence to refute them all. The professor's lecture casts doubt on the reading by using <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-31AD499B96EBF79EC824B726E31F147B" data-pwa-rule-id="READABILITY_1365" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-hint="Readability may be enhanced by using: several" data-pwa-suggestions="several" data-pwa-dictionary-word="a number of" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">a number of</pwa> points <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-3EF67C28F6681947053D8899ED5BC68B" data-pwa-rule-id="READABILITY_1603" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-hint="Readability may be enhanced by removing this" data-pwa-suggestions="(omit)" data-pwa-dictionary-word="that are " class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">that are </pwa>contrary to that dinosaurs are Endotherms.
First<pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-4DBACB37D461D3C0B7A399D6835D29D4" data-pwa-rule-id="READABILITY_2523" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-hint="Readability may be enhanced by removing this" data-pwa-suggestions="(omit)" data-pwa-dictionary-word=" of all" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done"> of all</pwa>, the author holds a view that as dinosaurs fossils found in the polar region, they can maintain its temperature above that of the surrounding environment. So they are endotherms. The professor casts doubt on this point that dinosaurs could migrate to warmer places in the cold months or hibernating.
Second, the reading passage asserts that as the dinosaur has its legs underneath its body, it can run efficiently, so it's endotherms. Although the professor highlights the fact that its legs position doesn't mean it can run, instead it can grow to a very large size, and this size has a benefit for it.
Finally, the reading passage brings up the idea that <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-D2A9452FC1370CAA356BD04C2237CD63" data-pwa-rule-id="READABILITY_1753" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-hint="Readability may be enhanced by removing this" data-pwa-suggestions="(omit)" data-pwa-dictionary-word="the presence of " class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">the presence of</pwa><pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-D2A9452FC1370CAA356BD04C2237CD63" data-pwa-rule-id="READABILITY_1753" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-hint="Readability may be enhanced by removing this" data-pwa-suggestions="(omit)" data-pwa-dictionary-word="the presence of " class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done"> </pwa><pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-74C9EF2BE9D9F31D2E7B9FAAB9CAA957" data-pwa-rule-id="SIMPLE_SPELLING" data-pwa-category="spelling" data-pwa-hint="Unknown word: haversian" data-pwa-suggestions="diversion" data-pwa-dictionary-word="haversian" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">haversian</pwa> canals in bone is a strong indicator that the dinosaur is an endotherm, on the contrary, the professor contends that there is a material type that thickens a bone and makes dinosaur stop growing in a cooler climate, so its growth goes from rapid to slow to rapid and endotherms <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-A30E462FB7F7EFF158B8B51B32E1249A" data-pwa-rule-id="READABILITY_2342" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-hint="Can you use a more specific verb?" data-pwa-suggestions="explode" data-pwa-dictionary-word="grow rapidly" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">grow rapidly</pwa> even in a cold climate.
In conclusion, the points made in the lecture contrasts with the reading. Migrating probability, the position of legs and noncontinuous growing <pwa data-pwa-id="pwa-590B613A2BA70FDC3E0DF2A351C558F9" data-pwa-rule-id="READABILITY_2033" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-hint="Readability may be enhanced by using: show" data-pwa-suggestions="show" data-pwa-dictionary-word="demonstrate" class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done">demonstrate</pwa> that dinosaurs are Endotherms is in doubt.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 201, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...hlights the fact that its legs position doesnt mean it can run, instead it can grow to...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, however, if, may, second, so, in conclusion, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.4613686534 153% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 5.04856512141 238% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 7.30242825607 82% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 12.0772626932 116% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 22.412803532 152% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 30.3222958057 132% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.01324503311 140% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 4024.0 1373.03311258 293% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 379.0 270.72406181 140% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 10.617414248 5.08290768461 209% => Less chars per word wanted.
Fourth root words length: 4.41224685777 4.04702891845 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 13.0342158672 2.5805825403 505% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 197.0 145.348785872 136% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.519788918206 0.540411800872 96% => OK
syllable_count: 1096.2 419.366225166 261% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 2.9 1.55342163355 187% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 3.25607064018 92% => OK
Article: 14.0 8.23620309051 170% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 2.5761589404 194% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 13.0662251656 92% => OK
Sentence length: 31.0 21.2450331126 146% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 493.611598043 49.2860985944 1002% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 335.333333333 110.228320801 304% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 31.5833333333 21.698381199 146% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 7.06452816374 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 4.19205298013 24% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.27373068433 140% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.272083759551 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.0996497079465 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0662205650399 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.162205337803 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0443174109184 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 44.4 13.3589403974 332% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -69.97 53.8541721854 -130% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 17.1 5.55761589404 308% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 30.7 11.0289183223 278% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 44.91 12.2367328918 367% => Coleman_liau_index is high.
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.09 8.42419426049 120% => OK
difficult_words: 118.0 63.6247240618 185% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 10.7273730684 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.498013245 137% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.2008830022 134% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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