Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: It is more important for the government to spend money on art museums and concert halls than on recreational facilities such as swimming pools and playground.
Enhancing public welfare so as to keep up with citizens’ living expectations has always been the core of government working aims. When it comes to the problem whether the government financial found should be distributed to artistic constructions likewise art museums and concert halls or recreational facilities like swimming pools, opinions vary from person to person. In my perspective, I simply hold that should prioritize recreational infrastructures over museums.
To begin with, constructing recreational facilities can bring tremendous benefits to a wide range of people, from the youngsters to the elder, while the audience to the art museum or concert hall is limited to people in pursuit of aesthetic appreciation. To be specific, not every one shows great interest and understanding of arts, especially for the children. They cannot tell the difference between the classic music and pop music and do not care about the underlying meanings or the profound message the painter wants to convey, let alone spare time to appreciate the delicate songs performed by an orchestra. Compared with that, sports become a much more popular option. Almost everyone has participated in sports activities, and it is quite easy for them to learn athletic activity. Therefore, the newly constructed facilities, like the playground will inspire them to actively involve in sports, which not only boost their spirit but also bring benefits to physical health.
Secondly, building recreational facilities provide an excellent chance to help people bond with each other which essentially meets the public’s social need. The swimming pool and the play ground will become an ideal place for people to unwind themselves, unleash their negative feelings and bond with each other. People can communicate with each other, share their hobbies and exchange body feelings, which contribute a lot to the harmony of community. When they are placed in a museum or a concert hall, they have to obey some courtesies, like no speaking aloud and no frequent discussion. Therefore, one may feel distant from others given indifferent atmosphere.
Admittedly, It is undeniable that constructing cultural centers like concert hall is also a smart choice. Art museums offer the citizens a great chance to expand outlook, broad horizons and deeply enrich their spiritual world. However,considering on the substantial benefits that recreational infrastructure bring, the money should be distribute to sports center at first.
To sum up, considering on the advantages as I mentioned above, government should invest on building recreational facilities in the first place.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, likewise, look, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, as to, to begin with, to sum up, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 43.0788530466 46% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2247.0 1977.66487455 114% => OK
No of words: 407.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.52088452088 4.8611393121 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49157444576 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08189605545 2.67179642975 115% => OK
Unique words: 252.0 212.727598566 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619164619165 0.524837075471 118% => OK
syllable_count: 682.2 618.680645161 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.6994312382 48.9658058833 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.833333333 100.406767564 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6111111111 20.6045352989 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.94444444444 5.45110844103 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237281537209 0.236089414692 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0637322312637 0.076458572812 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0462981225374 0.0737576698707 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123836135147 0.150856017488 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0285069984262 0.0645574589148 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 11.7677419355 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 58.1214874552 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 10.1575268817 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.03 10.9000537634 138% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.01818996416 115% => OK
difficult_words: 116.0 86.8835125448 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 10.002688172 150% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.247311828 156% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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