Do you agree or disagree: For success in school and work, the ability to adapt or adjust to a changing condition or circumstance is more important than having excellent knowledge of a job or a field to study.
Living in a highly competitive era when people are itching to achieve career success, the key to success has grabbed the commons' attention. Some individuals prioritize the ability to adapt to changing conditions over solid professional knowledge, while the opposing opinion also exists. Both views sound reasonable, but I firmly believe that adaption and excellent knowledge are indispensable ingredients making up of future success. Therefore only by combining the two imperative qualities can one make it through.
To begin with, excellent knowledge is the premise of career success, which lays a solid foundation for future promotion. If you are a total layman without any basic skills, you will be labeled as unprofessional less experienced. Chances are that you lose from the start line and even get dismissed when applying for a job. Even if you are quite smart or good at coping with emergence, you cannot fully exert your talents simply due to the lack of basic knowledge. On the contrary, graduating from a prestigious university or having acquired some important certifications proves that you have received systematic education and evidence your excellence, which usually ensures you a high starting salary and more available positions. Once you are on the job, you can quickly make the best of your accumulated knowledge and show your expertise.
On the other hand, the ability to adjust to changing circumstances is also imperative, since it can assist you to stand out among peers and get promoted quickly. Commonly, those people who only focus on the improvement of professional knowledge usually are labeled as "nerds" , which is quite harsh and mean. On the contrary, flexible people, knowing to make changes encountering different occasions usually achieve higher goals. Like Steve Jobs, who sensitively discovered the potential of smartphones and insisted on making innovations of iPhone products got a huge success. At that time, many famous technique companies were working hard on producing traditional mobile phones. It is undeniable that their techniques were also quite mature. However, it is only Steve jobs who realized the current trend and positively adjusted to keep up with the current ensured Apple a competitive edge and still ranked at the top on the market.
Therefore, both qualities are quite important. It is improper to highlight the merits of the former and ignore the latter. Only by jointly making use of the above traits can one make a huge success.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 122, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'commons'' or 'common's'?
Suggestion: commons'; common's
...ess, the key to success has grabbed the commons attention. Some individuals prioritize ...
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Line 1, column 435, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...ngredients making up of future success. Therefore only by combining the two imperative qu...
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Line 5, column 286, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...usually are labeled as 'nerds' , which is quite harsh and mean. On the c...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, still, therefore, while, on the contrary, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 43.0788530466 63% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2110.0 1977.66487455 107% => OK
No of words: 398.0 407.700716846 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30150753769 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46653527281 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92506221642 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 238.0 212.727598566 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597989949749 0.524837075471 114% => OK
syllable_count: 687.6 618.680645161 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.6014403079 48.9658058833 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.5 100.406767564 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9 20.6045352989 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.1 5.45110844103 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242707132971 0.236089414692 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0592343845421 0.076458572812 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.047937142849 0.0737576698707 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120409890998 0.150856017488 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0641816234082 0.0645574589148 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 11.7677419355 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 58.1214874552 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 10.9000537634 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.78 8.01818996416 122% => OK
difficult_words: 131.0 86.8835125448 151% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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