Patience is usually the best strategy. We should be patient rather than take action right now.
When it comes to what the most attractive personal character is , many people would prioritize patience over other qualities. They advocates that being patient is better than taking actions instantly. However, dissenting opinions also exist. As for me, I contend that though patience is a valuable virtue, making quick actions is also imperative.
To begin with, in this era where competition is ubiquitous, if being patient becomes the primary principle at workplace, it may arise procrastination,thus lowering work efficiency. Imagine a situation when one of your workmates could not hand in his work on time, being patient and waiting for him to complete all the stuff will waste tons of time. What's worse, it may lead to the whole project lag behind, costing greater expense. Therefore, under that circumstances, being patient is meaningless. Reacting quickly, finding ways to help him finish the work , or asking the client to for an extension would be much better.
Secondly, being patient sometimes serves as an excuse of being coward, since many people tend to fear for the potential consequences and usually hesitate before they make big decisions . Chances are that, when you are striving for a great opportunity like getting a promotion or applying for higher education, the best policy to fulfill your ambitions is to take actions instantly, otherwise you will miss them. For instance, when I determined to take part in the English public speaking competition, I contacted my teacher instantly, asking for professional suggestions and started making preparations. During the whole preparing process, I acted strictly in accordance with my schedule. Due to my constant efforts and strong executive, I was highly competitive throughout the competition and finally won. If I being patient all the time, I would definitely become procrastinated and failed to achieve my goal.
Admittedly, being patient does have its positive effects. People who are patient are always easygoing and good at bonding with others. Patience may also have the power to make you calm and peaceful, helping you remain the stability of inside world. Whereas, considering on the situations I mentioned above, being patient all the time may result in some serious consequences.
To sum up, both being patient and making quick actions are important ingredients making up our life, we should make different reactions when confronting various situations.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, whereas, as for, for instance, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 15.1003584229 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2056.0 1977.66487455 104% => OK
No of words: 383.0 407.700716846 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3681462141 4.8611393121 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42384287591 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9469979483 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 240.0 212.727598566 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.626631853786 0.524837075471 119% => OK
syllable_count: 631.8 618.680645161 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.7729595262 48.9658058833 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.8 100.406767564 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.15 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.35 5.45110844103 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239187450224 0.236089414692 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0702101199046 0.076458572812 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0660265099229 0.0737576698707 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134052536168 0.150856017488 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0309115438924 0.0645574589148 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 11.7677419355 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 10.9000537634 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.32 8.01818996416 116% => OK
difficult_words: 115.0 86.8835125448 132% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.