While spending the budget government focus should be general welfare of all the people. There has been no shortage of debate about how government should spent it's money for internet and public transportation to improve public lives. I think this depends on variety of factors; for example, number of people who own their private vehicles, need for public transport and internet, literacy rate of the area etc. Generally speaking, I believe that it's better for all concerned if government improves public transport rather than improving internet access. I feel this way for several reasons which I explore in following essay.
First of all, it's important to consider significance of public transportation in economic growth of a country. Certainly, it's possible for some nations to achieve economic success even without spending much in public transport. But, it is not the case in most of the nations. In developing countries like India, many people cannot afford their own vehicle and are dependent on public transport for basic needs like education and employment. By way of example, I can recall my personal experience. When I was in high school, I had to travel 10 kilo meters from my home in government bus to reach school. There were only 2 buses per day. If I missed the bus then I was going to miss classes for that day. Bus timings were highly inconvenient and despite the public protest local government did not pay any heed to improve transportation. As a result, many people in my area suffered a lot. At that time need for public transport was more than need for internet.
Hence, in addition to importance of public transport, I think it's better for individual as well as society if everyone starts using public transport. This can only be achieved by improving public transport facilities. If public transportation is good, many people will start using it instead of relying on their own vehicle. If every one in the city uses it, then imagine the amount of petrol we can save, traffic problem and air pollution that we can control. In addition to this public can save lot of money as well since pubic transportation is cheaper. My own personal experience is a compelling example for this. I am living in Bangalore which is one of the crowded cities in India. My office is very far from my home and I used to take private cab in order to reach office every day. However, after metro services started I started travelling in metro. It helped me to save lot of time as well as money. This is the case with many of my co-workers as well.
Finally, spending money to improve internet access does not necessarily mean welfare of all people. I will be the first person to admit that internet is crucial for development of a country. However, in developing countries like India internet is not available at every location. Also, many people in rural India do not know how to use it. It could be possible for government to make it available every where. But, it cannot teach each and everyone how to make benefit out of it. So, I think it's necessarily fair to claim that improved internet access may not have same benefits in rural as well as urban parts of city. In fact, I believe that general welfare of all the people in society should be the first priority of any government.
In summary, based on the arguments explored above, I am of the opinion that in most cases it's actually more beneficial if government concentrates on achieving welfare(i,e improving public transportation) of all the people in it's society. Later on it can work on improving other facilities like internet.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, finally, first, hence, however, if, may, so, then, well, while, for example, i feel, i think, in addition, in fact, in summary, as a result, as well as, first of all, in most cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 9.8082437276 184% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 62.0 43.0788530466 144% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 88.0 52.1666666667 169% => OK
Nominalization: 25.0 8.0752688172 310% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2990.0 1977.66487455 151% => OK
No of words: 621.0 407.700716846 152% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81481481481 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.991980728 4.48103885553 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70797928673 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 289.0 212.727598566 136% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.4653784219 0.524837075471 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 961.2 618.680645161 155% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 21.0 9.59856630824 219% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 37.0 20.6003584229 180% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.7383532335 48.9658058833 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.8108108108 100.406767564 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7837837838 20.6045352989 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.43243243243 5.45110844103 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 23.0 11.8709677419 194% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.88709677419 225% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27328076755 0.236089414692 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0679190075095 0.076458572812 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0640947041957 0.0737576698707 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17051490313 0.150856017488 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0558200495037 0.0645574589148 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.32 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 135.0 86.8835125448 155% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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