Do you agree or disagree with following statement? It is more important to keep your old friends than it is to make new friends.

friends has been an undeniable and chief part of our life, in which are much discussed not only
friends have been an undeniable and chief part of our life, which are much discussed not only

whether keep our old friends or make new friends.
whether to keep our old friends or make new friends.

I was an addictive
I was addictive

when people is younger,
when people are younger,

Not only do not they do a risk by finding new friends, but also do they trust their old friends.
Description: Not only...but also is not used properly. can you re-write this sentence?

demonstrate is that
demonstrate that

flaws:
No. of Grammatical Errors: 6 2
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No. of Words: 433 while No. of Different Words: 210

Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 20 in 30
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 6 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 15 15
No. of Words: 433 350
No. of Characters: 1978 1500
No. of Different Words: 210 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.562 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.568 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.541 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 123 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 97 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 62 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 41 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 28.867 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 13.579 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.733 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.367 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.567 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.188 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5