Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It’s necessary to put a lot of money into a business to make it successful.
The way to become a successful entrepreneur has become the topic of great controversy in recent years. There is a considerable body of opinion that holds it necessary to put a lot of money into a business to make it successful. This paper will elucidate the reasons why I am in favor of this opinion.
On one hand, career success is what I consider a crucial factor. It is noteworthy that putting a lot of money into a business is synonymous with accumulating more fundamental knowledge about the economy and business. Thanks to this, people are likely to acquire marvelous backgrounds which are really useful and practical in many business aspects. Accordingly, they are capable of understanding an extensive amount of problems precisely. With this in mind, they stand a golden chance to elicit alternative solutions to solve plenty of challenges. Eventually, this probably gives rise to obtain satisfactory results at the end of the journey. More notably, while they are putting a lot of money into a business, being exposed to many situations is inevitable. In the event of this, there is a likelihood for them to reflect on themselves meticulously. On the ground of that, it is possible for them to realize the strength and weakness, which is one of the most essential criteria that cannot be abandoned. During this process, they are prone to perfect themselves gradually. Under those circumstances, it makes it feasible for them to become a successful businessman. Given these points, investing in a business with a lot of money greatly contributes to career accomplishment.
On the other hand, some people express a different view that investing in a business with a lot of money forces them to face tremendous problems such as bankruptcy and another multitudinous failure. As a consequence, it creates a huge burden on career accomplishment. Although observing frugality in the expenditure of money might be true, it is just applicable to a minority. They have already well thought about the plan. Incidentally, there is a certain purposefulness about investing in the business. Therefore, it is unlikely that putting a lot of money into business prevents people from achieving a successful career. Another point often overlooked is that even if unexpected repercussions such as bankruptcy or another failure do exist, it should be considered as the chance for them to ameliorate the quality of works by learning from their mortifying failures. By the same token, they have an incentive to experience multifarious emotional thoughts and have indefatigable patience to face other challenges in their career. By virtue of this, they are given the opportunity to acquire the practical social skill. For instance, it could be effective communication, conflict resolution, active listening, and relationship management. If you master the social skills I mentioned in the previous sentence, it will definitely create a significant impact on the pecuniary profit. Beyond any doubt, their worthwhile endeavor bring about a dramatic change to the woeful state of the country's infrastructure. This, indeed, empowers people to gain prestige from society and become more successful. By and large, people should put off the idea that putting a lot of money in business prevents them from owning tons of pecuniary profits.
In summary, career success is the convincing reason for my approval. It is my hope that people take this writing into great consideration to gather diverse perspectives on the issue regarding the way to become a successful entrepreneur.
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement People who cannot accept the criticism from others will not be successful at working in a group 67
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement As modern life gets more and more complex it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize 73
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement The most important investment of a company is to improve the skills of its employees 83
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement It is more important for the government to provide money for things that are beautiful than things that are practical 73
- People should take time to relax with hobbies or physical activities that very different from what they do at work 73
Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, if, incidentally, look, really, regarding, so, therefore, well, while, for instance, in summary, such as, by and large, by the same token, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 15.1003584229 166% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 57.0 43.0788530466 132% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 93.0 52.1666666667 178% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2986.0 1977.66487455 151% => OK
No of words: 571.0 407.700716846 140% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22942206655 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.88831323574 4.48103885553 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15607876118 2.67179642975 118% => OK
Unique words: 285.0 212.727598566 134% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.499124343257 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 970.2 618.680645161 157% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 19.0 9.59856630824 198% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 4.94265232975 243% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 31.0 20.6003584229 150% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.7572390554 48.9658058833 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.3225806452 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4193548387 20.6045352989 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.61290322581 5.45110844103 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 23.0 11.8709677419 194% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261885508854 0.236089414692 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0643709857631 0.076458572812 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0931267955181 0.0737576698707 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16314158946 0.150856017488 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0524709674193 0.0645574589148 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 58.1214874552 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 10.9000537634 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 155.0 86.8835125448 178% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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