Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The knowledge we gain from personal experiences is more valuable than the knowledge we gain from books. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. Do not use memorized examples.
It is a well-known fact that acquiring knowledge from many resources is the feature of this century. I believe that life experiences are significant resources for learning and more crucial than books' ability. I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, the experiences that we get from life always teach us the best lessons. We always acquire the most valuable knowledge from our life. For example, how to deal with people. How can we work with other people, and the most important skill is communication skill which cannot be learned without life experience?. However, People cannot know these aspects from books. My personal experience is a compelling illustration of this. When I was in high school, I used to be a shy person. I tried to make progress by reading many books about social skills. However, none of these books helped me to get a better personality. On the other hand, when I have communicated with other people and have made friends, my character has developed significantly. We can confidently say that life experience is pivotal in some aspects that books cannot be beneficial.
Second, the knowledge from life experience is unforgettable. Even though people tend to forget the information they got from books., they will ignore the lessons they gain from life experience. For instance, my brother used to be a thriftless person. However, after lost his money, he has become more aware and thrifty. He has never forgotten this lesson in his life.
Third, the primary purpose of life experience is to reach out without fear for a newer and richer experience. Life experience teaches us not to be afraid of any unique knowledge or aspect of our life. This valuable lesson cannot be learned from books.
In conclusion, I firmly believe that the knowledge we gain from life experience is more valuable and crucial than we learn from books. This is because of the importance of life experience and because personal memories stay with us longer than facts, we read in books.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, second, so, third, well, for example, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1719.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 345.0 407.700716846 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98260869565 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72840319509 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 212.727598566 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.498550724638 0.524837075471 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 531.0 618.680645161 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 9.59856630824 177% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.2493333262 48.9658058833 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.625 100.406767564 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.375 20.6045352989 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.45110844103 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272714772117 0.236089414692 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0870399047886 0.076458572812 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0768680382639 0.0737576698707 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172323524869 0.150856017488 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0744773550316 0.0645574589148 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 11.7677419355 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 58.1214874552 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.01 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.26 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 86.8835125448 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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