Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Life today is much easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Lifestyle of people has changed rapidly with the development of modern technologies. Today’s technocrat lifestyle is comfortable and easier in many ways than some decades ago. But this modern lifestyle has also brought some anxiety and something negative along with its positive sides. Still, today’s life is the lot better and has made the world a beautiful place to live.
One of the biggest advantage of today’s life is we do not have to worry much to do our day to day things. There is at least some technology or machine involved to make it easier for us. For example, we may begin at the start of a day. We don’t have to worry about if we will wake up on time. There is alarm clock to wake us. After that, many kitchen equipment like microwave oven, refrigerator comes into play to help us prepare our breakfast. Rapid development of transportation system can help us to reach our workplace within no time. We do not have to walk miles of road as earlier and become stressed out even before reaching our workplace. Computers are everywhere to assist us in our work like managing our business, doing calculation for us, storing an enormous amount of data in an effective way. There is also air conditioners, heaters at our disposal to provide us comfort in harsh weather conditions. In a nutshell, we can say that we can do whatever we want or we can make ourselves comfortable very easily with the help of technological advancements.
Besides this, prevalence of internet has also added a different layer of comfort to us. We can get any product from anywhere in the world at our doorstep. We can get any information without consuming much time. We can virtually visit any places on the earth through photos and videos.
Every good thing also has an adverse effect or a negativity. Modern lifestyle gives us comfort but it has grown anxiety in our mind, uncertainty in nature. Air conditions give us comfort. But CFC emitted from air conditioners has become a cause of increase in temperature. It is melting our polar ice caps and it poses a risk of flooding in many coastal cities due to rise of sea water level. We need many industries to make gadgets and machines to support our modern comfortable lifestyle. However, this industries polluted our environment so much that now we have to think about how we can get clean air to breathe or clean water to drink.
This comfortable lifestyle also gives rises to many diseases like obesity. People do not want to burn their energy which is making them fat. People are getting addicted so much with the marvels of modern lifestyle that they are forgetting their social life.
In conclusion, we can tell that our life is now much easier and comfortable than early years. Every comfort and our every wish is accessible to us. All thanks to technological advancement. On the other hand, we also have to think to carve down the negative effects of this modern lifestyle. That will make our world a much better place to live.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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... us, storing an enormous amount of data in an effective way. There is also air conditioners, heater...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...nformation without consuming much time. We can virtually visit any places on the e...
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
... modern comfortable lifestyle. However, this industries polluted our environment so ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... our world a much better place to live.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, may, so, still, at least, for example, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 64.0 43.0788530466 149% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 81.0 52.1666666667 155% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2489.0 1977.66487455 126% => OK
No of words: 522.0 407.700716846 128% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76819923372 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.77988695657 4.48103885553 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73259930938 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 259.0 212.727598566 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.496168582375 0.524837075471 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 809.1 618.680645161 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 34.0 20.6003584229 165% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.7891654194 48.9658058833 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.2058823529 100.406767564 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3529411765 20.6045352989 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.05882352941 5.45110844103 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 20.0 11.8709677419 168% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.85842293907 233% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136162235935 0.236089414692 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.04227819648 0.076458572812 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0383722250911 0.0737576698707 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0831989148985 0.150856017488 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0262601320151 0.0645574589148 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 11.7677419355 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.79 10.9000537634 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 86.8835125448 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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