Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? As modern life becomes more complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize.
In this digital word, our life becomes more complex. The internet, website and other social media give young people many information about how to manage their life . For them who want to live a better life must learn how to plan or organize, have basic skills and essential abilities. In my opinion, I think people now cant do without these two abilities, planning and organizing. Here s the reasons to support my point.
Planning helps people keep in achieving goals and crystalize objectives. The premise of success is to set different small goals, plan well and work hard for them.
A plan means we have direction to go , what next pace we should go. Planning ahead, on the one hand, could effectively put one on the right track thus prevent energy from being scattered or wasted. According to the survey, the success rate of people with plans is 70 percent higher than those without plans. So, we should learn to organize and plan our life rigorous. Let the plans become our habit, and integrate into our life.
Also, organize will make things more effective. To be clear about ones goal is the premise of efficiency which allows us to create the maximum value in the limited time. We should learn to allocation, how exploit your advantages to the full and how to reduce the time. General, for the ambitious people, they exert the organize skill to the extreme that result in short time, good quality and high efficiency. I have to emphasize the true is that to succeed, we all have to be planned and organized.
Because nowadays young people have many opportunities to choose, we need to do is find the best way and do it better. Good performance is key to hold these opportunities in hand. Without a plan , complex things will only get more complicated. Without an organize, our lives will become disorderly.
All in all, the abilities of planning and organizing have to be regard as the basic skills to live. It help us to fulfill our life goals and help to improve our performance when opportunities come.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, thus, well, i think, in short, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1666.0 1977.66487455 84% => OK
No of words: 352.0 407.700716846 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73295454545 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52634443164 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 212.727598566 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576704545455 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 523.8 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.5803348258 48.9658058833 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 72.4347826087 100.406767564 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3043478261 20.6045352989 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.52173913043 5.45110844103 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.304016772379 0.236089414692 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0828755869506 0.076458572812 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0555303740788 0.0737576698707 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152374503217 0.150856017488 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0529421927688 0.0645574589148 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 11.7677419355 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 58.1214874552 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.56 10.9000537634 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 86.8835125448 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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