Media has strong impacts on our lives. It is observed that numerous youngsters spend a significant amount of their time watching televisions. Although some people are for the opinion that televisions positive effects cover the negetives, some believe that they adversly affect our lives. I personally, agree with the latter idea.
There are some reasons for this claim, which I will elaborate on, through the following paragraphs.
Firstly, watching television is extremely time-consuming. Right after your favorite show on the television ends, another show starts and even though you were not planning to watch that, particular show effects will influence on your ability to control your inclinations. Therefore, you may end up watching television for hours each day. Take a personal experience as an example. I can recall a day before one of my exams when I promised myself to just watch my favorite movie on the television and after that focus on my studying. However, unfortunately, immediately after that movie ended, a show which I was looking forward to watching for a long time started and I could not miss that. With all these explanations, it can be easily said that sticking to your schedule and controlling your time which is crucial for youngsters with various responsibilities, is tremendously difficult when it comes to watching TV shows.
Secondly, we should consider the alternatives and how the time allocated to televisions can be used more usefully. It is widely accepted among psychologists that books are great substitutes for movies. According to what they say, watching television has harmful effects on the brain and also negatively affect people's behaviors. In contrast reading books functions certain parts of the brain that no other activities do. For instance, my mother was an advokate of reading, during her childhood. However, my aunt was a fan of TV shows and used to watch television for hours during the day. Now, the consequences of these two different activities are obvious in my mother's and my aunt's behaviors. While my mother has a lot of information on different topics and an attractive way of talking, my aunt is somehow a hollow person.
In summation, young people should value their time and spend this valuable gift on activities like reading rather than watching televisions. Later in their lives, they will see the positive effects of their accurate decision. Therefore, I firmly suggest that everybody restrict the time they spend watching television.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 333, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[2]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: contrast,
...negatively affect peoples behaviors. In contrast reading books functions certain parts o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for instance, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 55.0 43.0788530466 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2108.0 1977.66487455 107% => OK
No of words: 403.0 407.700716846 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23076923077 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48049772903 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93160820525 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545905707196 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 650.7 618.680645161 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.982540001 48.9658058833 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.652173913 100.406767564 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5217391304 20.6045352989 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.82608695652 5.45110844103 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183611692927 0.236089414692 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0485800473241 0.076458572812 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.043868535882 0.0737576698707 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0946612308224 0.150856017488 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0221074505963 0.0645574589148 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 11.7677419355 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 10.9000537634 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 86.8835125448 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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