Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Nowadays, it is better for children to grow up in the countryside than in a large city. Use specific reasons and examples to develop your essay.
Most people think that raising children in the rural areas is better than in a larger city. However, I personally believe that it would be wiser for children growing up in a big city. There are several reasons why I feel this way, which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, living in a big city, children will be full of opportunities for going to prestigious schools and having more chances to find a decent job. Due to abundant resources, talented teachers usually will come to a big city to teach. And because of the high quality of schools and teachers, students will choose to study in a big city. What is more, there are plenty of job opportunities in a big city where people can get any occupation they want. My personal experience is a compelling example of this. I grew up in Taipei City, a Capital City of Taiwan, where is full of learning resources for either tutoring or outstanding schools. When I was little, I was tutored by an extraordinary American teacher, and I gained my English ability which helped me get high scores in every English test and even helped me to enter a good university. Furthermore, after I graduated from college, there were numerous jobs for me to apply for. I found my first job only within two weeks. Even though I changed my occupation in the next year, I could still find a new job very soon because there are many job openings in Taipei.
Growing in the countryside will miss a lot of opportunities for choosing a better school or jobs. Lack of funds and resources, not only teachers are not willing to teach in rural areas but also companies are reluctant to open a branch here. For example, my cousin Amy, she was raised in the countryside, she was diligent in studying and always went to the best schools in the countryside. However, when she met foreigners in her hometown, she could not converse with foreigners in English because her teacher only taught her how to memorize vocabularies. What was worse, when she graduated from the university, she could not find any decent job, and eventually she came to Taipei. Now, she has a high-paying job in Taipei, and decided to raise her kids in Taipei in the future.
In conclusion, I strongly feel that growing up in a big city is a better choice for children. This is because of better education resources and numerous job opportunities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... decent job. Due to abundant resources, talented teachers usually will come to a...
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Message: The adverb 'usually' is usually put between 'will' and 'come'.
Suggestion: will usually come
... abundant resources, talented teachers usually will come to a big city to teach. And because of ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, so, still, for example, i feel, in conclusion, to begin with, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1943.0 1977.66487455 98% => OK
No of words: 419.0 407.700716846 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.63723150358 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52432199235 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70675327499 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 212.727598566 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.505966587112 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 616.5 618.680645161 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.0616939845 48.9658058833 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.5238095238 100.406767564 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9523809524 20.6045352989 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.42857142857 5.45110844103 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1479466049 0.236089414692 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0534250551921 0.076458572812 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0607851269851 0.0737576698707 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128733255026 0.150856017488 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0681842854342 0.0645574589148 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 10.9000537634 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 86.8835125448 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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