Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
One of the best ways parents can help their teenage children prepare for adult life is to encourage them to take a part-time job.
As some people may hold a view that the part-time job requirement from the teenagers is not a wise idea; however, others may take an opposite view and believe that it is decent preparation for the children before they attend to society as adults. I personally agree with the second belief. In the following paragraphs, I will delve into the most outstanding reasons which persuade me to put forward this perspective.
The first exquisite reason which gives the adherence to my outlook is that this participation is a good method for a teenager to become an extroverted person. Indeed, based on the today’s lifestyle, the majority of children are solo kids in the family with the restricted connection with their surroundings. According to the noteworthy, intelligent static conducted by the Tabriz University, approximately seventy percent of the children in Tabriz are the solo and introverted kids. In this condition, by having a part-time job, they possess this opportunity to interact with the people. This interaction can be considered as a social experience for them to extend their social networks.
The next fact embraced my idea is that it is a finance management. It does not matter what they will choose in their future lives as a career; monetary and its management is the fundamental base of all jobs. It is explicit as the crystal that the interpretations of financial income, benefits, and loss are more tangible when they are experienced in the practical way. Moreover, they cannot be experienced by the family's financial support. As a result, this part-time job is a proper experience for the actual job. In addition, if the kids face the financial failures in their youth ages, they gain this awareness how to prevent and handle it when they face them in the future.
The last indicator of the validity of viewpoint is that this job presents a deep insight for the teenagers. Although the scientific materials are taught in the schools by a holistic schedule, these programs are not accountable for the real and practical life. They deliver a chasm perspective from the subjects just in the theoretical base; on the other hand, the social interaction provided by the part-time job is proliferated in the other aspects of life. A vivid example can be given to shed a light on the issue is my own instance. When I was a high school student, for the sake of my great GPA in the mathematics, I assumed that I can opt the civil engineer as my future career. However, as I worked as a part-time job in a construction company, I got it that even though I am good at the calculation, the atmosphere of this job is not suited my feelings. Consequently, I altered my aim from the civil to the architecture, and now, I am really successful in my major. Thanks to the prolific view presented by that part-time job.
To wrap it up, based on the all aforementioned reasons one can draw this conclusion that the part-time job is a logic option to prepare for the future job; inasmuch as, it enhances the social communication, teaches the finance management, and provides a deep insight.
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Discourse Markers used:
['consequently', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'look', 'may', 'moreover', 'really', 'second', 'so', 'in addition', 'as a result', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.213559322034 0.229887763892 93% => OK
Verbs: 0.135593220339 0.158761421928 85% => OK
Adjectives: 0.105084745763 0.0866891130778 121% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0322033898305 0.046263068375 70% => OK
Pronouns: 0.071186440678 0.0685040099705 104% => OK
Prepositions: 0.125423728814 0.118717715034 106% => OK
Participles: 0.0254237288136 0.0351676179071 72% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.98172253527 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0220338983051 0.0309702414327 71% => OK
Particles: 0.00169491525424 0.00188951952338 90% => OK
Determiners: 0.152542372881 0.0887237588012 172% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0152542372881 0.0209618222197 73% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0118644067797 0.0139019557991 85% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3104.0 2387.08602151 130% => OK
No of words: 530.0 408.028673835 130% => OK
Chars per words: 5.85660377358 5.86048508987 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.79809637944 4.48200974243 107% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.337735849057 0.338922669872 100% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.267924528302 0.251872472559 106% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.205660377358 0.174417080927 118% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.147169811321 0.112833075102 130% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98172253527 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 263.0 212.727598566 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.496226415094 0.524397521467 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 59.2359317296 59.2087087015 100% => OK
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6684587814 111% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0434782609 20.5533526081 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.7487747925 48.84282405 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.956521739 120.699889404 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0434782609 20.5533526081 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.565217391304 0.644075263715 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.54480286738 0% => OK
Readability: 49.8359310911 45.7405998639 109% => OK
Elegance: 1.52482269504 1.45489161554 105% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.388289645895 0.300154397459 129% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0988629076895 0.103427244359 96% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0640616087831 0.0752933317313 85% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.556769044766 0.497263757937 112% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.161922846817 0.151897553556 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.169447850978 0.114077575197 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0548231796574 0.0781384742642 70% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.518275797169 0.336927656856 154% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.055846177928 0.067059652881 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.293342783495 0.210909579961 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0419660315069 0.0618886996521 68% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8870967742 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.86379928315 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.91756272401 122% => OK
Positive topic words: 7.0 8.42114695341 83% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.4623655914 122% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.75985663082 109% => OK
Total topic words: 13.0 13.6433691756 95% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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